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Date Posted: 10:15:22 11/10/09 Tue
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dea
Subject: i like it
In reply to: Debi 's message, "More Molly" on 08:39:57 11/07/09 Sat

you keep the flow in this one. it's easy to read and gets the background in smoothly. keep it coming!

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[> [> Thank you dea! -- Debi, 13:19:47 11/10/09 Tue

I'm finding the differences between Molly and Valerie and trying to play them up. At the beginning it was too close to the other story, sounded similar. That could part of why I chose to describe her immediately, just to emphasize that difference to myself.

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