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Date Posted:15:36:32 04/09/04 Fri In reply to:
Tracy Houghton
's message, "Re: Feast or Famine" on 22:37:29 04/08/04 Thu
1. This proposal is a game show where the
object is for four obese participants
to lose as little weight as possible. They do this while living in a hot environment.
2. Did a good job describing each of the charachters. It all sounds good.
3. I thought that the proposal was very clean and crisp. There was nothing confusing.
4. I noticed a few gramatical errors, but nothing major.
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