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Date Posted: 19:36:48 07/07/03 Mon
Author: Steel Dream
Subject: Impossible
In reply to: Steel Dream 's message, "Fare ye well...." on 16:18:49 07/06/03 Sun

The sodden stallion turns, moving back towards shore for a moment, his head hanging low and coat soaked and dishevelled, mane dangling limply across his neck. A pair of once-proud amber eyes now are broken with pain and defeat as he looks upon his love. "DOL..." His voice is hoarse as he breathes a long sigh. "DOL, I love you too." He cannot bring himself to meet her eyes. "I love you, more than anything else in this world. And..." the chestnut chokes slightly, staring at the quietly-lapping waves beneath his hooves, the uncaring elements going about their business unaware of the drama around them. "...that's why I have to leave you." Finally Steel manages to meet his beloved's eyes. "Because... because I'm never around. Because I hinder you. Be free, love." If you love someone, set them free. With that he painfully forced his gaze to move away from the slender, stunning palomino and away again across the ocean as his steps take him trudging away.

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[> They don't want to be set free -- Daughter of Light, 20:42:19 07/07/03 Mon [1]

Her despair mingled with concern as he turns. His eyes were haunted, broken. She knew, in that moment, that he was not leaving her selfishly, but out of great sacrifice. Still, her heart burned to run to him as he approached, to feel his touch again, to let that moment never end. When he spoke, her world stopped for him, revolving slowly on his struggling words. With painful understanding in her eyes, she held his own for as long as he would, wanting him to see her emotions since she dared not trust her voice. She was hurt, yes, but she loved him, and understood. A retreating wave sucked at her hooves as her love walked out of her life. Picking up her feet against this current, she turned away, sodden banner hanging limply against her hocks. She could not bare to watch him disappear again. With a step as heavy as her heart, she walks to her son, standing some distance away in the sand. He was the only one who could possibly know what was whirling through her mind, the only one that had been with her long enough to understand.

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