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Date Posted: 23:36:15 03/06/05 Sun
Author: Lightning Dark & Wide Shut
Subject: Re: Life or Death?
In reply to: Dancing Sun 's message, "Re: Life or Death?" on 20:55:30 03/06/05 Sun

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Name: Light Darkness (DUH!)
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Age: 2 and a half yrs
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Colour: Reddish-Brown with
>>>black
>>>>>>>>mane
>>>>>>>>>>>>and
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>yellow
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>stripes
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Breed: I dunno
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>A milky white, young mare
>cantered
>>>>up
>>>>>>>to
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Lightning
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Dark she tossed her head trying
>to
>>>>>get
>>>>>>>>>her
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>mane
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>out
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>of
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>her eyes, "hello dear friend, I'm
>>>>>glad
>>>>>>>>>you
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>could
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>join
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>us." Her voice sounded like soft
>>>>rain
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>pattering
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>to
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ground, she nipped Lightning Dark
>>>>>>>>>>>playfully.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Lightning Dark looked to see her
>>>>>sister
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Juvenile
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Bliss
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>and nipped her back "Nice to know
>>>>>>>someone
>>>>>>>>>>>>here
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>isn't
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>a
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>complete stranger" she said
>nipping
>>>>>her
>>>>>>>>>>back
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"Come
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>on,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>let's play!" and she ran off with
>>>>>>>>Juvenile
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Bliss
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>galloping after her
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>JB stretched her neck forward
>erging
>>>>>>>>>herself
>>>>>>>>>>>>to
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>go
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>faster, racing her sister was
>>>>something
>>>>>>>>she
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>hadnt
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>done
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>in a long time and she enjoyed the
>>>>rush
>>>>>>>of
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>adrenalin
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>again.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>LD looked behind her and saw her
>>>sister
>>>>>>>>>>>gaining
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>on
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>her. She didn't dee where she was
>>>going
>>>>>>>and
>>>>>>>>>>>ran
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>head
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>first into a bigger, taller,
>stronger
>>>>>>>>>>>stallion.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"Oh o..." she said as the stallion
>>>>>>towered
>>>>>>>>>>>over
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>her
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>JB came up to see if she was alright
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"Oh, my god! Lighning Dark! Are you
>>>>ok?"
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Concern showed on every feature of
>her
>>>>>>face
>>>>>>>>>>for
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>her
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>sister, as she stared up at the
>>>stallion
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>defiantly,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>then suddenly she realised it was her
>>>>>long
>>>>>>>>>>lost
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>twin
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>brother.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Name: Dancing Sun
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Age: three
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Gender: stallion
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Colour: white with red patches
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Statis : darq
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"Dancing Sun?! oh how I'm glad too
>see
>>>>>>you,
>>>>>>>>>>>this
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>is
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>like a family reunion!"
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"as I am glad to see you both, my
>>>little
>>>>>>>>>>>>sisters,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>am
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>I
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>right in presuming you still are both
>>>>>>>>>>>neautral?'
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>he
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>bowed gladly.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"Well yes I am but I'm not too sure
>>bout
>>>>>>JB"
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>DS and JB were twins, yes, but what
>>they
>>>>>>>>>didn't
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>know
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>was that LD had the hots for DS since
>>>she
>>>>>>>>>first
>>>>>>>>>>>>>saw
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>him.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>'Sigh' LD thought 'If only he wasn't
>my
>>>>>>>>>brother
>>>>>>>>>>>I
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>would ask him out in a second' she
>>>>thought
>>>>>>>>>>sadly
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"So! What brings you here Dancing
>Sun?"
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"Well... I just found out a bit of
>>>>>>disturbing
>>>>>>>>>>>news
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>about our family, it looks like this
>>isnt
>>>>>>>>>>>actually
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>much of a family reunion, Mother told
>me
>>>a
>>>>>>>>>month
>>>>>>>>>>>>>ago
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>that I'm adopted, I was taken in when
>my
>>>>>>>>mother
>>>>>>>>>>>>was
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>killed by wolves, I'm not your
>brother!"
>>>>he
>>>>>>>>>>>sighed
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>depressed and rested his head across
>>LD's
>>>>>>>>>back.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"Oh," gasped Juvenile Bliss shocked and
>>>>>>>>>stunned.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"No way Jose!!" Lightning Dark exclaimed
>>>>>>>loving
>>>>>>>>>>>the
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>touch of Dancing Sun's head on her back
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>'This can't be real' she thought
>>excitedly
>>>>>>>>>'Now's
>>>>>>>>>>>>my
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>chance'
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"Um... Dancing Sun? May I talk to you in
>>>>>>>>private
>>>>>>>>>>>>for
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>a
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>minute?" Lightning Dark asked
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Already having an idea what this might be
>>>>>>>about,
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Juvenile Bliss stepped awy with a cheeky
>>>>grin
>>>>>>>on
>>>>>>>>>>>her
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>face, "go get him LD."
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"Yes? What is it LD? Is something wrong?"
>>>he
>>>>>>>>>asked
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>concerned. Ever since he had been told
>>that
>>>>>he
>>>>>>>>>>>wasnt
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>really one of the family he had
>fantasised
>>>>>>>about
>>>>>>>>>>>him
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>and LD being together, maybe this was his
>>>>>>>>chance.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Lightning Dark trotted over to an
>>>overhanging
>>>>>>>>>>willow
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>for a bit of privacy and waited for
>Dancing
>>>>>Sun
>>>>>>>>to
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>follow, which he did.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"Um... Dancing Sun! Um... ever since I saw
>>>>>>>you...
>>>>>>>>>I
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>um... Well, I dunno... Well I've kinda
>>>>>>>>>developed...
>>>>>>>>>>>O
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>jeez, how can i say this! It's just that-"
>>>>>>>>>>Lightning
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Dark was cut off but the sound of a crash
>>of
>>>>>>>>>>thunder
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>"How can this be possible? Today was
>>>supposed
>>>>>>to
>>>>>>>>>be
>>>>>>>>>>>a
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>sunny day! It can't've change unless a
>dark
>>>>>>>force
>>>>>>>>>>of
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>energy is being used!" Lightning Dark said
>>>in
>>>>>>>>fear
>>>>>>>>>>>as
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>all the other horses in the field panicked
>>>>>>>>>>>>>"it's alight Lightning Dark, I'm here,
>>>nothing
>>>>>>>>>could
>>>>>>>>>>>>>beat me, I'm darq, and if this froce is
>too,
>>>>>>then
>>>>>>>>>it
>>>>>>>>>>>>>will be alright," he cooed trying to
>comfort
>>>>>>her,
>>>>>>>>>it
>>>>>>>>>>>>>distressed him that she was worried.
>>>>>>>>>>>>"Yes I suppose you're right." Lightning Dark
>>>>>said
>>>>>>>>>>>>looking out to the field of panicking horses
>>>>>"But
>>>>>>>>>you
>>>>>>>>>>>>know me. I simply hate thunder storms!
>And...
>>>>Oh
>>>>>>>my
>>>>>>>>>>>>god! Where's Juvenile Bliss? I can't see her
>>>>>>>>>>>>anywhere!!!" Lightning Dark panicked and ran
>>>>out
>>>>>>>>>into
>>>>>>>>>>>>the field of all the other horses who,
>unlike
>>>>>>her,
>>>>>>>>>>>>were much, much bigger, stronger and
>>taller...
>>>>>>>>>>>Stricken with panick for her safety both
>>>Dancing
>>>>>>>Sun
>>>>>>>>>>>and Juvenile Bliss galloped out to her,
>>pushing
>>>>>>>past
>>>>>>>>>>>other horses not caring if they were hurt for
>>>>>fear
>>>>>>>>>>>that there little Lightning Dark would be
>>>>killed.
>>>>>>>>"My
>>>>>>>>>>>dear, are you hurt?" they cried in unison.
>>>>>>>>>>Lightning Dark heard them both but they were
>>>from
>>>>>>>>>>opposite sides of her. She looked left, that's
>>>>>>where
>>>>>>>>>>she heard Dancing Sun's voice. She looked
>>right,
>>>>>>>>>>that's where she heard Juvenile Bliss' voice.
>>>She
>>>>>>>>>>reared up on her hind legs hoping they would
>>see
>>>>>>>her.
>>>>>>>>>>They did and they both ran faster to get to
>>her.
>>>>>>But
>>>>>>>>>>before anyone of them did, a giganormos horse
>>>>>>bumped
>>>>>>>>>>into her and she was knocked to the ground,
>>>>>>>>>>unconscious, while most horses missed her some
>>>>>>>>stepped
>>>>>>>>>>on her without giving her second thought
>>>>>>>>>Fired with anger at the other horses disregard
>>>for
>>>>>>>>>life, especially a life he loved, he bolted
>>>>forward
>>>>>>>>>splitting the crowds in half, giving him a
>clear
>>>>>>path
>>>>>>>>>to Lightning Dark, "please, please dont be
>>dead,"
>>>>>he
>>>>>>>>>whispered tears running down his face, "I
>>>couldn't
>>>>>>>>>bere anyone else dying!"
>>>>>>>>Lightning Dark stiired a bit when Dancing Sun
>>said
>>>>>>>>this opened one eye to look at him. "Dancin Sun"
>>>>she
>>>>>>>>said just as Juvenile Bliss walked through
>>towards
>>>>>>>>Lightning Dark and Dancing Sun "I'm sorry. I'm
>so
>>>>>>>>sorry I didn't say this before but... I love
>>>>you..."
>>>>>>>>Then she fell unconscious again her breathing
>>>>>>>>extremely shallow. Rain falling down on her and
>>>>>>>>Dancing Sun as well as the other horses who had
>>>>>>>>stopped panicking as the thunder had stopped
>>>>>>>With a rush of passion he dragged to shelter in a
>>>>>>>dark, warm cave, "I love you too, Lightning
>Dark,"
>>>>he
>>>>>>>whispered as the night swooped around them.
>>>>>>:::::Lightning's Dream:::::
>>>>>>Lightning wandered through a dark, damp and cold
>>>>>>forest. She was searching for something but she
>>>>didn't
>>>>>>know what.
>>>>>>'Where's Dancing Sun and Juvenile Bliss?' She
>>>>thought.
>>>>>>'What am I doing here?'
>>>>>>"Hello? Anyone? Someone help me!" She called. She
>>>>>>comtinued to trot her way through the forest.
>>>>>>"Hello?" she called as she saw something move
>>>>>>"Hello my dear child" said a voice
>>>>>>"Wh-who are you?" Lightning asked
>>>>>>"My dear child, it is against my wishes to do this
>>>>but
>>>>>>I'm Death. I've come to take you away to the
>>>>>>afterlife" 'Death' said
>>>>>>"No! I don't want to go! I want to stay with
>>>Juvenile
>>>>>>Bliss and Dancing Sun!" Lightning Dark said moving
>>>>>>backwards
>>>>>>"I'm sorry my dear child but you can't! There's
>>>>>>nothing I can do!" Death said
>>>>>>"Please!" Lightning begged as she started to cry
>>>(can
>>>>>>horses cry?) "I don't want to die! I want to stay!
>>I
>>>>>>love Dancing Sun! And Juvenile Bliss! I don't want
>>>to
>>>>>>leave them"
>>>>>>Death sighed "My dear child, you have something to
>>>>>>live for. In my book of rules, rule #104 says, 'if
>>>>you
>>>>>>have something to live for you may live'. So I'll
>>>let
>>>>>>you live. Good luck, my child"
>>>>>>And with that Death dissapeared in a flash of
>>light.
>>>>>>In the cave Lightning stirred and opened her eyes
>>>>>>"Dancing Sun" she whispered as she was still weak
>>>and
>>>>>>tired
>>>>>"Stay still my love, you are weak," he said," if
>you
>>>>>need something just say the word and i'll get it."
>>>>'Love' Lightning Dark thought 'He called me "Love"'
>>>>"Dancing Sun, why did you call me 'Love'? How do you
>>>>know? And where is Juvenile Bliss?" Lightning Dark
>>>>said straining to lift her head to look for her
>>>"I called you love, because.... because I love you, I
>>>have for a long while now,"he paused wondering what
>>>type of reaction he would get, "don't worry about
>>>Juvenile Bliss, she is a smart giral, she will be
>>>safe."
>>Hearing that Juvenile will be safe Lightning Dark
>>dropped her head and closed her eyes.
>>"I love you too, Dancing Sun. I also have for a long
>>time"
>He smiled bewildered by this peice of news, "I'm glad
>you do, I don't know I would have done if you had
>rejected me." He smiled then rested his head on her
>back to keep her warm from the freezing night air.
~~~~~~ New Character~~~~~~
Name - Wide Shut (sounds weird, right?)
Age - 7yrs
Gender - Male
Breed - i dunno... But he's evil... on the darq side
Colour - Electric Black body, mane and hooves plus his eyes
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
As Lightning Dark and Dancing Sun slept, Juvenile came in and saw them. She also decided to sleep.
Unaware to all of them there was also someone there, someone who wanted to ruin Lightning Dark and Dancing Sun's relationship... Wide Shut
"Make the most of it now, Dancing Sun. I'll make sure to ruin your life by taking away your girl and your special friend" A cold and mysterious voice whispered into the night before you could hear the galloping of hooves taking off into the night

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