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Subject: Re: poetry good or dumb


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jellybean360
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Date Posted: 20:39:09 06/17/05 Fri
In reply to: Bobby 's message, "Re: poetry good or dumb" on 19:59:35 02/12/04 Thu

it is okay but i would like there to be alot for articulation in the way that you express your playstation game. also you mention the word playstaion game about 7-8 times and its also in your title. but it just needs room to grow. okay poem though.

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