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Date Posted: 19:59:35 02/12/04 Thu
In reply to: Julie V. 's message, "Re: school poetry readings" on 13:59:21 01/14/04 Wed

I was wandering if my poem was ok or just dumb here it is
My Play Station game

There is much sighing, and weaving
Over my Playstation game
And there is much wailing and grieving,
But I love my Playstation game
It might cost me money,
And it might cost me time,
But I’ll give anything to play my Playstation game.
There are many games to choose from but few that I love,
But that is just better reason for me to love my Playstation game.
When I’m in my own world playing my PlayStation game,
I feel invulnerable to all the hassles of everyday life.
Like doing my homework and doing my chores.
Even though my mom yells and hollers to stop playing that game,
I don’t because my PlaySation is the love of my life.
I’m grounded right now but I’m not mad,
Because I know there is always next week to play my Playstation game.

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Re: poetry good or dumb Erica H 22:29:10 06/13/04 Sun

Re: poetry good or dumb Ashley mac baby 13:21:51 11/06/04 Sat

Re: poetry good or dumb I WILL NEVER FOGIVE 11:22:38 12/29/04 Wed

WILL NEVER FORGIVE -- BRITTANY ALTORFER, 11:24:40 12/29/04 Wed

Re: WILL NEVER FORGIVE -- erica h, 18:40:08 01/31/05 Mon

Is My Poem Any Good??????? Caitlin 15:53:46 04/22/05 Fri

Re: poetry good or dumb jellybean360 20:39:09 06/17/05 Fri

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>I was wandering if my poem was ok or just dumb here it >is >My Play Station game > >There is much sighing, and weaving >Over my Playstation game >And there is much wailing and grieving, >But I love my Playstation game >It might cost me money, >And it might cost me time, >But I’ll give anything to play my Playstation game. >There are many games to choose from but few that I >love, >But that is just better reason for me to love my >Playstation game. >When I’m in my own world playing my PlayStation game, >I feel invulnerable to all the hassles of everyday >life. >Like doing my homework and doing my chores. >Even though my mom yells and hollers to stop playing >that game, >I don’t because my PlaySation is the love of my life. >I’m grounded right now but I’m not mad, >Because I know there is always next week to play my >Playstation game.

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