無題──古詩婉約，但要分平仄，又要用文言，很難；新詩較自由，但卻多露骨，要隱晦一點又難。只好怪自己不才。 -- TED'S PUB

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Date Posted: 22:32:34 04/07/01 Wed
Author: 網魎
Subject: 無題──古詩婉約，但要分平仄，又要用文言，很難；新詩較自由，但卻多露骨，要隱晦一點又難。只好怪自己不才。

擁有你，
放在眼前，輕快的在路上跑。

旋轉的萬花筒，
從你那裡我看到 ──
寶藍色的天空；
碧綠色的深海；
鮮紅色的玫瑰；
澄黃色的小雞 ──
一片繽紛、彩色的理想國。

走開，回來，發見你不在石凳上。

失去了萬花筒，
從瞳孔裡我看到 ──
天空是黯灰的；
深海是墨棕的；
玫瑰是烏紫的；
小雞是淡褐的 ──
一個呆滯、黑白的現實界。

尋覓著，
在鬧市中，找回失落了的你。

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