**A peaked eyebrow raises in a genuine thought and she tips a delicate dial in her consideration. In quiet debate she answers, her tongue in poetry and set to rhyme. Who am I..? Very good question.**
They told me that it doesn't even matter,
But now I see they lied.
The faces changed, cruel and battered,
And I see what lies inside.
Shrouded in the depths of the void,
The shadows, they light my way.
How can you see what's gone and destroyed,
They ask, but I never say.
I hold fast to a hopeless dream,
In the prayer it might save me.
Pushing away temptation's gleam,
Just to drown in it's mockery.
I've walked the path of death in vain,
And I have yet to stumble.
Leaping blindly into the world of pain
I've vowed to never crumble.
**Her dark eyes narrow and her sharp gaze wanders to each Siren, Mime, Veil, and Knife. Vivid emotions rush her eyes and debates rage her mind. Rising respect greets each the solitary siren and the caged mime, and an illuminant flame flickers to Veil, and curious intrigue is cast upon Knife, and with an impish smirk she chuckles**
.and who are you?.
The Martyr's Sacrifice
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[.one slip is all it takes.] -- .knife edge., 18:47:52 02/17/02 Sun
[.shrouded beast resides in comfort umong his raven brothers..the shadows..they birthed him..raised him in their silent hymns..and taught the eloquence of a prince to the elegant whelp of a pauper..it was stud's enamel that flicked the first bit of ashen terrain upon his wretched, meager coffin..within the shadows he resides..and so he is..one of them.]
[.my guess is known.]
[.now tell me, dear.]
[.I must prefer.]
[.when secrets are clear.]
[.at least your own.]
[.for mine are locked.]
[.within a chest.]
[.do you now see why none have mocked.]
[.myself of stoney breast?.]
[.tell me.]
[.are my presumptions correct?.]
wow, that was amazingly crappy...
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.a gathering. -- .siren., 09:41:15 02/18/02 Mon
**what a gathering of poets have we here...and judging commences. intriguing, indeed. audits swivel subtly to encage all sounds, crania elevated 'loft slender fibrous boa to better observe all that have flocked now together at her inquisitive melody. indeed, this was what made a harem strong, for now could the weak be winnowed out and the worthy could bind together in united might. a silver'd cry arrows forth from scorched velveteens, a greeting to her 'sisters,' fellow viragos that resided in these regions of pandemonium**
.salutations.
**subtle tunes whirl within her mind, carefully mutating as a glance is cast upon each equine, for in music there is soul and heart. ebonite pedates graze the terre, nevertheless wounding the earth, now trod upon by many restless feet. a quiet nicker is emitted to her peers, an expressively simple dip of head to her superiors, and a piercing watch is placed on those yet awaiting to rise in rank...if they could prove worthy. this knife edge - who was he? he had not been observed previously. careful, careful, sir. as mime has noted, the knife may turn on yourself if you do not tread with respect. you hold my attention; take care the spotlight does not find reason to turn nasty**
~siren~
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.mimick. -- Mime, 18:50:34 02/17/02 Sun
torrent of winds. hushed silence. listen closely.
what is this? two more to join the guessing game? Smile played briefly 'pon ashen lips. The knife, surely one to be wary of. One wrong move and the knife may fall upon you head. And who was this, the Maryr? One of great intrigue, worthy. Nod issued to each, stream of frosted air escaping nasals in equid greeting. More was wished to be known of each female within circle forming. Each held strengths, different from eachother yet strong all the same. Coals flit o'er each in turn. Poetic they were in tongue...Yet how did each fair in battle?
.trapped in an invisible box, yet maybe simply invisible to you.
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correction: each female and STALLY *sowwie Cat* -- Dani (Mime), 18:54:45 02/17/02 Sun
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[. one slip is all it takes .] -- .knife edge., 17:24:20 02/18/02 Mon
[.shadowed beast observes silently the parades of arrogance..silken derma quivers slightly..oculars turn upon mime..emotionless lamps register naught..but intrigue proven by abnormal audit position..small thorns appear drawn forth..mug tosses violently..as if throwing a thought far beyond.]
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**With the moon as my spotlight...* -- Martyr, 18:57:19 02/18/02 Mon
They told me of a fairy tale,
I wonder if it's true.
Caught delicately in a dreamland's veil,
Told to me by you.
Deep within the promised lands,
Comes whispered tales of lore.
Stout of heart and brave I stand,
But I wish for something more.
I've danced with the Unicorns,
The floor, a dreamer's mind.
But bright my glories, and reborn,
I dance until my time.
Broken myths are crucified,
I'll never know the reason.
But I have seen the angels cry,
They weep because of treason.
Built again by the Wisher's hope,
As far as the eye want see;
The roads are quietly paved in gold.
And the stars now call to me.
**Holding his gaze evenly she breaks it to look inquistively at each mare holding a circle drawn together by a riddled rhyme. Carelessly ignoring salvation's scream she tilts her head against Siren's words**
.i'm thinking i am the iron alliance?.
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*sigh* -- Cat, 19:23:50 02/18/02 Mon
too damn lazy for ic...so here's my little analisis: ok...i told u a tale of dreams...as in something not to be believed. ur strong and brave, but u want love. you've dreamed and wished, but never got anywhere. the dreams were broken by reality, which betrayed them, but all dreamers are reborn and keep dreaming and wishing...and now it's time for you to love.
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** -- Lace, 19:30:50 02/18/02 Mon
Mhmm.. basically that in a nutshell, lol
-Chipmunk
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|. Poetic 'Gain .| -- |. Veil Of Tears .|, 06:02:30 02/18/02 Mon
|. Poetic Contest, eh? .|
|. 'Rrival Of Two More .|
|. 'Till The Dawn Does Rise .|
|. Our Poetic Songs Shall Soar .|
[ Ah, I see two new ones. One of a knife edge. Another of a Martyr, quite intriquing instead ]
. 'Deed this 'Mime' 'ad her trust indeed, as did 'Silent Zephyr'. Quite frankly, 'Siren' 'twas one of the wisest, for her emotions 'twere expressed clearly. 'Knife Edge' 'twas a new one, yet her dominance was true. And finally, thou 'Martyr' t'would be seen with care .
. The angels shall clant 'er arrival, yet she has no care. The others shall chance her dominance, and they will feel her snare. Some, if brave enough, shall come forth to thee. And soon enough, the flame they'll feel, and most likely see .
. 'Sharp' and 'Keen' her personality, blazing as the sun. The florescent light off the blade, makes the shadows run. It seems she 'hath a great mind, and emotions expressed clear. And yet, in time, we'd see the truth, or perhaps hear .
. Ooids gaze 'pon fatale's o' bunched 'clique', sculpted duo plunging for'ard 'ward the essence o' the center. Seems indeed, all here 'ad a different persona, and in time it could prove greatness .
[ Mime, I see your whit so clear. Martyr, I see your flame. Siren, I hear your shrill call. Silent Zephyr, you feel no shame. Knife Edge, you are wise indeed. I, but a watcher. Her opinion uncleaer. Yet she will sufficate you in your tear. ]
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