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Date Posted: 19:34:27 11/13/03 Thu
Author: Vera
Subject: Re: writing 6
In reply to: ROBSON 's message, "writing 6" on 15:46:22 11/12/03 Wed

Very good argumentation. See my editing suggestions below.

>If I won a "pair" of tickets to travel to Disney
>World,the only person that I would take with me is my
>litle older daugther.

Do you mean younger?

>knowldgement.She knows some geographical informations

Information is uncountable.No plural form.

to make her to understand ( to make her understand )

>Almost every day she asks me why are the americans so
>evil, (Almost every day she asks me why the americans are so)

Vera
>evil,

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