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Date Posted: 11:35:07 06/21/03 Sat
Author: Anonymous
Subject: A Happy Visit-Pt 2Finale- Sierra

“OH MY GOD!”, gasped Amber while holding her hand over her mouth, eyes wide, and emotionally stunned. “HEY!!!!”, she shouted. “HEEEEYYYYY!!!!!” There was no answer. Still in fear, she slowly walked down the hallway. At the end of of it was a window. The thin white curtains blew in the brisk breeze. Amber hurrily ran towards the window to escape. But the fear she felt quickly changed to absolute terror seeing the window slowly and supernaturally disappear and changing to a white wall. As the window disappeared, a white glow shined at its borders as the window slowly vanished. “Where am I?!!!” yelled Amber hysterically. “WHERE HAVE TO TAKEN ME YOU OL’ HAG WITCH!?!!!” Continuing to slowly back away from the window, she finally decided to try one of the doors. She opened one door very slowly and witnessed a horrible paranormal incident. Inside the room was pitch black with bursts of white lights flashing. The lights kept blinking on and off. To make matters worse, there was a long chain about 50 ft from the ceiling. Hanging from the chain was a female corpse who appeared to be decayed. The skin was as wrinkled as an old potato. The hair was hip length and white. The corpse has no eyes and the body worn a white evening gown smothered with dirt stains. On the head of the corpse was a dirt stained tiara and across the body was a sash smeared in dirt. The chain swung the hanging corpse left and right through the blinking lights. “AAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Amber screamed. “YOU EVIL,SICK, DERANGED, MANIACS! “WHAT DO YOU WANT WITH ME!!!” WHAT DO YOU WANT!?!!!” Her fear suddenly turned to anger because as she opened the other doors, she found the same incident. This time, there were additional swinging corpses hanging form 50ft chains. All wore dirt smeared evening gowns, sashes, and tiaras while slowly swinging left and right from 50ft chains. Their hair was also hip length and white and their skin was decayed. The corpses also did not have eyes but only sockets. The flashing lights continued. Amber hurrily slammed the door, ran to another door still finding the swinging corpses in the flashing lights. But that all quickly changed. The next door she opened led to the back of the old house of the elderly couple. The 3ft wheat stalks surrounded the house as the soft wind caused it to bend. Amber smiled and very was very relieved while quickly turning to inspect the area. She continued doing a few joyful circular turns and quickly ran off fearing the unknown. But safety turned to bitter disappointment. As she ran, she was quickly returned to the room of the swinging corpses. “NOOOOO!!!!!!!” Amber screamed as she walked around in the room while trembling. The flashing lights made it look as though she and the swinging corpses were moving in slow motion. While looking for freedom in panicked terror. Amber became traumatically disappointed. She accidentally bumped into one of the corpses when she happened to look behind her as she ran. Since the corpse caused her to stop, she looked at it’s sockets where its eyes used to be, With a frightened look on her face, she watched it swing into the blinking lights. Then all of a sudden, another 50ft chain dropped down from the ceiling. As soon as Amber jumped to the side just a little, the swinging corpse she was starring at quickly grabbed her, landed on the ground by foot, and hung her on the chain. Amber screamed as if she was sentenced to eternal death. The screams were instantly stopped since the corpse stuck the chain through her neck. Outside the home of the elderly couple came a shiny red corvette. It pulled up on the side of the house. Out of the car came a young woman in her 20’s. Approaching the porch of the couple
while watching them slowly rock back and forth in their rocking chairs, she pleasantly asked asked “Excuse me, but where’s the nearest highway?” The elderly couple slowly turned to look at each other as the both of them wore wicked grins. Back in the mysterious room, Amber’s corpse swung in the flashing lights as her eyes were no longer in their sockets. Her corpse swung, swung, and swung as the rest.

THE END

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[> Re: A Happy Visit-Pt 2Finale- Sierra -- Anonymous, 15:54:12 06/24/03 Tue

This storey is GREAT! very ironic! Write MORE!


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[> Re: A Happy Visit-Pt 2Finale -- Anonymous, 15:55:17 06/24/03 Tue

That story was GREAT! Very ironic! Write more!


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