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Date Posted: 03:52:49 04/25/11 Mon
Author: asiacheetah
Author Host/IP: ppp-71-128-204-48.dsl.sndg02.pacbell.net / 71.128.204.48
Subject: Chapter 1 - R rating for language
In reply to: asiacheetah 's message, "The Recruit (working title) - Michael pre-LFN story" on 03:47:50 04/25/11 Mon

�Holy sh*t! What the hell happened?�
Schmidt asked Percy as 3 recruits in stretchers were wheeled by, each moaning in pain.

�That new Valentine op went ballistic and beat them up.�

�What? Michael? He came in what 3 months ago?�

�Two.�

�How the hell did he manage to beat up 3 people? I thought one of them was Griess. He�s just a few weeks away from the end of his training isn�t he?�

�Yeah Griess was one of them. The other two are also cold ops; both have been here more than a year.�

�I didn�t know they were training Michael for cold ops as well.�

�They aren�t.�

�Then how did he take out 3 of them.�

�Guess he was really pissed.�

�He hasn�t said more than a few words since he got here. Looked like an easy push over. What did Griess and boys do to make him go off the deep end?�

�I wasn�t there when it happened, but apparently Griess was picking on him for being recruited to be a Section who*re.�

�Guess he didn�t like to be called that.�

�No I heard he didn�t respond to Griess and the boys� taunts. I heard it wasn�t until Griess decide to get physical with him that Michael flipped out.�

�Physical? You mean he tried to beat Michael up?�

�No. You know Griess. He doesn�t think before doing anything. I�d be surprise if he passes his evaluation. He was taunting Michael about how with his long hair he looked just like a really pretty girl and that he hadn�t had a decent tail for a long time.�

�Jesus! What happened when he said that?�

�Nothing. Michael just ignored them.�

�Then how did they end up in the infirmary?�

�Well Griess started pushing Michael. When Michael went to leave the gym he had the other two pin him down. Said he wanted a sample of what the targets will be getting and that�s when Michael flipped out.�

�Well f**k! So where is Michael now?�

�They took him to containment.�

�How�d he look?�

�Well looks like he�s going to have some nice bruises from the fight, but man you shoulda seen his eyes.�

�What?�

�Let�s just say if they hadn�t pulled him off Griess, Griess would be meeting his maker right about now.�

�And I thought he looked harmless.�

�I�d steer clear of that one for sure. He looks like trouble.�

�Heck yeah you don�t have to tell me twice.�

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