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Date Posted: 13:14:40 04/22/09 Wed
Author: KT
Author Host/IP: 64-92-129-244-client.sopris.net / 64.92.129.244
Subject: Like the way you have (r)
In reply to: taurus 's message, "Chapter 204" on 02:48:41 04/20/09 Mon

made a parallel between Nikita/Mr. Jones and Karen/SYLok as being destined to fulfill the roles their fathers had chosen for them. Nice.

Also like the way you've put the Dragon "to sleep" so that Section One can catch them off guard and sneak in when they least suspect. It would be interesting to have M & N be their nemesis in complete disguise for the final battle, so that the triads would not suspect them. Since they think they're dead already, they wouldn't be looking for them.

Just rambling on here... love your story, KT ^!^

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