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Subject: Wonderful telling of a story

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Date Posted: Sunday, August 14, 01:40:19am
In reply to: Mary 's message, "Chapter 8 - Part II" on Sunday, August 14, 12:06:05am

Michael is torn between his love for her and wanting to protect her and the feeling of needing to distance himself from her too.

Then there's Nikita who has just had the shock of her life in learning that the man she loves so deeply is still alive. I think its very realistic the way you've portrayed her; shocked, angry, hurt, wanting to understand but wanting to protect herself from any further hurt either.

If Nikita's weakness is being too emotional, Michael's is being too protective. It makes watching the two of them all that more enjoyable.

Thanks for the new chapters. I love checking in and finding new chapters waiting.


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You're catching all of this....(r)MarySunday, August 14, 10:41:02am

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