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Date Posted: 07:31:30 10/17/09 Sat
Author: Max
Subject: Re: ...AND ANOTHER ONE
In reply to: MABVN 's message, "...AND ANOTHER ONE" on 19:53:02 10/14/09 Wed

Constructive criticism... don't go to the press yet.

The word "truculent" needs to replaced. A whip is a inanimate object and cannot be truculent. It's connotation is emotional and human, i.e., a speech given or anger can be truculent, but never an object.

Nice stuff otherwise Mab. Savagely cathartic...

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