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Date Posted: 16:56:08 10/13/05 Thu
Author: Cars
Subject: Another Poem
In reply to: cc 's message, "Wow...that is kinda deep and setimental...is that the right term?" on 05:17:56 10/13/05 Thu

Yeah, he was kinda depressed and bitter =p

now he's depressed and grieving

The first gasp of life
As you bore me into this world
MY life only had meaning for you, with you
You're leaving me alone, as I left before
Is this some sort of revenge?
I remember when I was little
You said you would never leave me
But then I left instead
At the young age before I knew what was right
Did you fear for me then? As I fear for you now?
Lying on the brink of the dark abyss
Waiting for God to take you in
Can't you see, you can't go away
There is still a need mother, it's me, needing you
I've been given yet another reason to be angry at God
Who steals you before your time
Grief threatens to wash over me and hold me under
Only you would save me, and now you can't.
It's cold mother, space was not as warm as I thought
Hold me to you as you did all those years ago
I'll comfort you, I'm coming home to you
Please let me be there when you say goodbye.

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Replies:

They are really good -- Shazzy, 18:21:59 10/13/05 Thu
My god, it's like Sylvia Plath all over again! -- Em, 23:54:43 10/13/05 Thu
- Are you trying to tell me something? hehe -- Cars, 02:51:08 10/14/05 Fri
  - What tha???? -- Em, 22:20:50 10/14/05 Fri
    - that's probably a good thing -- Cars, 23:44:11 10/14/05 Fri
      - I blame Karen this time -- Cars, 20:05:37 10/15/05 Sat
        You're just rolling them out -- Em, 00:32:32 10/16/05 Sun
        i sent tim tams and ANZACs to USA -- Cars, 07:56:25 10/20/05 Thu
        What??!??? -- Em, 02:32:50 10/28/05 Fri
        I was trying to decide whether it was friendship or love... -- cc, 05:52:17 10/28/05 Fri
        Ok that makes sense now!! (NT) -- Em, 21:04:42 10/28/05 Fri

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