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Date Posted: 13:58:41 02/22/06 Wed
Author: Susan
Subject: Re: SIMPLICITY
In reply to: Sylvia Mohr Bartlett 's message, "SIMPLICITY" on 14:32:21 02/21/06 Tue

I loved this story the first time I read it and again reading it now. And just like the first time I read it I think it screams for a sequel from Mac's point of view.

Harm definitely needed to tell her how he feels regardless of how Mac feels for him. He was totally right in doing what he did. I loved the way you had him do it. But now, I think that Mac needs to do something, as my mother says (cleaned up for the non-potty minded) Poo or get off the pot! The ball's in her court and I'd love to see how you have her handle the ball! (gutter-free reference there! <vbg>

I hope you'll consider keeping this in the WIP folder of your muses mind. Along with If Wishes Were Horses (can't wait to re-read that one and more if you write it!), Spring Cleaning, Silly Love Songs, Confessions, Command Responsibilities (you were considering a series of those, hope you'll still do that!), FWWATT, There is Hope (even though you said it was finished, I'd love to know what was in the Admiral's note to him!)

You have such a gift with words, I can't even tell you.

Pardon the rambling, that's what you get when you eat supper at the computer! At least I dind't spill! loL!

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  • Re: SIMPLICITY -- Marianne Valentine, 14:28:06 02/22/06 Wed
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