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Date Posted: 20:52:21 03/31/09 Tue
Author: Emma's Nana
Subject: I agree with rosie and rivited - nice epilogue, good use of the challenge lines however, they were too easy - I think you need to go back and pick another challenge.
In reply to: . 's message, "Round Trip Ticket" on 17:04:50 03/31/09 Tue


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[> Satisfying in its content... -- anamika, 21:55:25 03/31/09 Tue [1]

...but not so much in its length. That however, is only because you wrote what you did write so well that I (and I think Emma's Nana too, among others) are left thirsting for more. Less than a thousand words, yet containing the small details and subtlety that allowed me to see it all unfold.

Come to think of it, your summary contained an entire story ;)

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