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Date Posted: 22:40:48 06/17/08 Tue
Author: Ella
Subject: What an amazingly fun story!!! Thanks for sharing!
In reply to: . 's message, "Switch" on 19:25:52 06/17/08 Tue

Yup, it has to be Keru! You're European spellings gave you away ;)

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[> Re: FF: Switch -- Marianne, 22:41:52 06/17/08 Tue [1]

"She snorted eloquently. "In your dreams." He grinned, remembering how she'd said those same words to him once before. "You don't want to be in my dreams." He repeated his words and glanced at her, waiting for the red light she was going to throw his way. "Why not?" She replied. "It's only fair since you feature prominently in mine." He almost drove his car off the road. "Mac!" He couldn't believe she'd just said that to him. His shock was almost immediately replaced with something much warmer. " - That bit was SO cute!
"She cleared her throat dramatically, and faked a deep male voice that sounded mildly flirtatious. "What kinds of dreams are we talking about? Anything you want to share?" "I would not say that, either. I don't say things like that." He infused a healthy dose of affront in his reply. "And I don't sound like that." "Please." She dismissed his objections, enjoying herself thoroughly. "You throw those kinds of one-liners out all the time." " - Yes, you DO do that, Harm!
"He realized, after a few moments that she was staring at him. He glanced at her, and found her watching him with an expression of studious concentration. "What?" He asked, feeling oddly nervous. "I'm trying to think like you." Her frown deepened as she squinted up at him. "Don't hurt yourself." He cautioned, grinning. This was definitely fun. She rolled her eyes. "Well, it is hard to slow my brain down to your pace." "Hey. Watch it, Marine." " - LOL
" "It's lunch time now. Maybe we should follow him." "Follow him?" Harm was sceptical. "C'mon. That's exactly the kind of idea you would come up." "Well, it is an ingenious proposition." He could acknowledge brilliance when he saw it. "Stay in character, Harm." She told him, shaking her head in amusement."I'm supposed to be the arrogant one today." They shared a glance, breaking into a soft laughter. " - LOL
"She looked up at him, and broke into an impish grin. "Permission to come aboard?" This time he did laugh. "Cute." He hauled her back onto the walkway." - Yes, that WAS cute - as was Harm in that black beater when he used that line on Mac originally.
"She pulled her hand out from under his, and placed it on his arm." - One moment she was still drawing doodles wtih her chop sticks in her plate and the next Harm is already letting go of her hand? If I were Mac, I'd want the hand-holding to last a bit longer, so it's, I don't know, more memorable?


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