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Subject: Awesome, you are

Author:
darkphoenixfyre(Eric)

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Date Posted: 22:21:51 11/23/07 Fri
Author Host/IP: 222.152.103.105

impressing
me in a whole
new way every time
we talk now, though I've
known you for years now it
has become apparent to me how
very much more
I will get to learn
about you in the
days to come, as you are able to
be patient with silliness like
mine, and I can pretty
much guarantee you
that you will need
it soon enough

not that you've ever
given me any
reason at all for me
to doubt in
your proven patience
just that I am
very well acquainted
with how I
can test that noble trait

it's been built by a past you're sharing with me now
that makes me wonder why I stood back
thinking you were happy then
because I never
asked
when I should've
but didn't because I thought I
would have been rude to question your
romance that wasn't nearly so healthy as I really did

honestly believe might lose me
your friendship.

and I apologize to you, sweet lady, for being that selfish.

OH!
and I now know
that Roger Moore
is your James Bond
too!

.

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[> Subject: Re: Awesome, you are
Author: andy [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 22:22:38 11/23/07 Fri Author Host/IP: 222.152.103.105 Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I sense there is changes on the mount! So sincere, so thoughtful, so soulful! It's all there on my screen coming to life. thanks, andy . [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Awesome, you are
Author: Janel [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 22:22:58 11/23/07 Fri Author Host/IP: 222.152.103.105 Beautifully sweet Eric, tis good to read it again. :) (Squeezes) I love it. . [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Awesome, you are
Author: Sasha [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 22:23:45 11/23/07 Fri Author Host/IP: 222.152.103.105 . ~ awwwww...Eric, hon, this is so tender and heartfelt this one feels like a blossoming of friendship to a deeper level of love and understanding....a privilege to read it, dear one kiwi hugs Sash xx . [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Awesome, you are
Author: Christine [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 22:24:08 11/23/07 Fri Author Host/IP: 222.152.103.105 ~Eric~ Ya know, the best part of these writes is that the reader gets to see honest soul growth in you - and live your moments. Cool! ~Hugs~ . [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Awesome, you are
Author: Jessica [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 22:24:49 11/23/07 Fri Author Host/IP: 222.152.103.105 I think your muse is lucky to have such an eloquent admirer. I'm enjoying reading your work. Thanks! . [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Awesome, you are
Author: dpillath [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 22:28:03 11/23/07 Fri Author Host/IP: 222.152.103.105 this is super-cute and quite passionate! props to the author! . [ Post a Reply to This Message ]