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Subject: Cookies


Author:
Mick
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Date Posted: 17:51:35 11/24/07 Sat
Author Host/IP: 72.148.206.147

Cookies

I never cared for cookies.
Just give me the dough.
With my tongue and my spit,
I’ll mold something I enjoy.
You can join me or not, but
please,
don’t quote from a cook book.

I never cared for cookies,
just give me the dough.
My tongue.
My spit.

My recipe.

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[> Subject: Re: Cookies


Author:
Janel
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Date Posted: 22:02:53 11/24/07 Sat
Author Host/IP: 4.254.83.58

Very interesting and creative write Mick,
I much enjoyed the read. Thanks for the awesome share. :)

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[> Subject: Re: Cookies


Author:
Paul
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Date Posted: 04:16:14 11/25/07 Sun
Author Host/IP: 82.19.147.103

Hahahaha Mick! Brillient!

Actually I only discovered cookie dough about a year ago, in a tub of ice-cream my friend bought. Wow! Foodies delight, and so I can at last appreciate this poem first hand!.....OK I know it is a bit sad....I am English...I don't get out much! Hahahahahaha,

Your work always shines my friend,

Peace and hope,

Paul.

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[> Subject: Re: Cookies


Author:
andy
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Date Posted: 08:08:22 11/25/07 Sun
Author Host/IP: 71.164.81.192



How cool this is!

Love the metaphor and the way
you just went right at something
almost everyone loves and said

................. No Way

Give me the dough and the spit!

This Rocks in style and content.

thanks,
andy

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[> Subject: Re: Cookies


Author:
Darkerside of light
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Date Posted: 09:36:09 11/25/07 Sun
Author Host/IP: 217.42.170.5

Clever and understated pen

DSL

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[> Subject: Re: Cookies


Author:
Christine
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Date Posted: 20:22:40 11/25/07 Sun
Author Host/IP: 76.202.213.17

Yep...agreed with DSL...VERY clever...*grins*




~hugs~

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