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Subject: Book Of Shadows - I thank you child Author: Mireille [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] Date Posted: 14:44:48 11/22/07 Thu Author Host/IP: 78.112.255.174 Book Of Shadows - I thank you child* For showing misery in my street Families burnin' in crappy hotels Pitiless fulfilled duties, I thank you child. For exposing on my tv screen White tents, red crosses, copper fragments Suffering gets its own rainbow, I thank you child. For exhibiting forgotten grounds Sun burnt, sterilized, orange-agentized, War was in High Towers, Concrete Street, I thank you child. For letting us ignore your existence We wouldn't forgive you your intrusion On the playground we secure for our kids, I thank you child. For not dyin' in my arms, your mom preferin', Not wasting on my sofa, dirt suits better your skin, Not spitting in my soup, I never liked it runny, I thank you child. *and this is the last of the serie [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]

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[> Subject: Re: Book Of Shadows - I thank you child Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] Date Posted: 01:45:43 11/23/07 Fri Author Host/IP: 217.42.170.5 heart wrenching powerful visual pen DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> [> Subject: Re: Book Of Shadows - I thank you child Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] Date Posted: 10:25:19 11/24/07 Sat Author Host/IP: 78.112.255.174 Thank you very much DSL, really. [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Book Of Shadows - I thank you child Author: andy [ Edit | View ] Date Posted: 14:20:54 11/23/07 Fri Author Host/IP: 71.164.81.192 Mireille, I so enjoyed these poems. Each and every one of them in fact. This one is just so well done. Tight and tragic yet somewhat redeemable. I am a fan of your pen! thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> [> Subject: Re: Book Of Shadows - I thank you child Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] Date Posted: 10:27:10 11/24/07 Sat Author Host/IP: 78.112.255.174 For some unknown reason, my lines tell the opposite to Zakk's lyrics. Thank you Andy for enjoying. [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Book Of Shadows - I thank you child Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] Date Posted: 05:18:16 11/24/07 Sat Author Host/IP: 222.152.103.105 Quote: ________________________________ Suffering gets its own rainbow, ________________________________ ~ WOW!!! I love this line!!! I love the entire poem of course, though that line jumped out at me I have sooo enjoyed this series, sweet Mireille you have such a beautifully unique and richly satisfying poetic voice loving this lots!!! *kiwi hugs* Sash xx . [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> [> Subject: Re: Book Of Shadows - I thank you child Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] Date Posted: 10:28:17 11/24/07 Sat Author Host/IP: 78.112.255.174 Thank you Sash, I understand how sometimes a line jump to the reader's mind. *hugs* [ Post a Reply to This Message ]