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Subject: Three in one


Author:
Darkerside of light
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Date Posted: 08:06:33 11/23/07 Fri
Author Host/IP: 217.42.170.5

Touch me the three in one

Touch me
Lead me to the light
May your words be my armour?
There must be another way to fight
May have strength for today and the faith for tomorrow
When tomorrow comes

Touch me
As I can be not the man you see
Touch me
Make me history
Touch me
Let me be a child let me be
Touch me
From earthly chains for once I can be free
Touch me so I can be a child let me be

If only for the hour let me carry the cross
I’m dying here full of fear
May I climb onto your white horse?
So I might make it to heaven
You told me once
I’m begging to hear that I ‘m still forgiven

Fighting a war
With an empty gun for a thousand enemies, of me there’s only one
Right now I need to see
God the father
God the Holy Spirit
God the son
No need for an army
Bring it on
Bring it on
Bring it on
The three in one
Bring it on
The three in one

Touch me
So I can be that child
Touch me
Let me be that child let me be, let me be

DSL

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[> Subject: Re: Three in one


Author:
andy
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Date Posted: 14:15:26 11/23/07 Fri
Author Host/IP: 71.164.81.192



This poem works really well read out loud.

I read it then voiced it and it comes alive
when vocalized!

Enjoyed the style and cadence as well.

thanks,
andy

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[> [> Subject: Re: Three in one


Author:
Darkerside of light
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Date Posted: 04:10:54 11/25/07 Sun
Author Host/IP: 217.42.170.5

Hi Andy

Funny how I have never tried reading this one out loud thanking you for your kind words

DSL

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[> Subject: Re: Three in one


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 05:29:53 11/24/07 Sat
Author Host/IP: 222.152.103.105



Quote:
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Touch me
So I can be that child
Touch me
Let me be that child let me be, let me be

_____________________________________________


~ such a heart wrenching plea, Mark

wow...this one goes straight to the heart
so powerfully poured, dear one

*hugs*

Sash xx


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[> [> Subject: Re: Three in one


Author:
D
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Date Posted: 04:13:04 11/25/07 Sun
Author Host/IP: 217.42.170.5

If I can touch one heart with these words job done
thanking you Sash

DSL

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[> Subject: Re: Three in one


Author:
Christine
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Date Posted: 10:15:05 11/24/07 Sat
Author Host/IP: 76.202.225.28

~DSL~

Do you have music that goes to this? The cadence, the feel makes it into lyrics of faith...niiiiicceeee!!!


~Hugs~

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[> [> Subject: Re: Three in one


Author:
Darkerside of light
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Date Posted: 04:15:59 11/25/07 Sun
Author Host/IP: 217.42.170.5

Hi Christine

I would dearly like to be a song writer it's just I can't write music

thanking you

DSL

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[> Subject: Re: Three in one


Author:
Paul
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Date Posted: 04:33:12 11/25/07 Sun
Author Host/IP: 82.19.147.103

Mark, having had the chance to work with you on stage mate, I can honestly say that this piece is a must for reading. So if you don't do it at the next 'Poets Party' I will set Sandie onto you! LOL!

Seriously though, you have a unique poetic voice. Good to have you here for sure,

Peace,love and hope,

paul.

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