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Subject: Miss Masquerade

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Sue

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Date Posted: 21:36:55 01/05/08 Sat

V1
Chained to dark designs
she contemplates
her next lover
Miss Masquerade
Moon kiss unites
her silhouette
So soon she will
Masquerade.

C
Empty smiles
Hidden by the light
Of her masquerade
She delights his soul
She�s in his sights
But will never be his
He dances with air
but she will never fade
Miss Masquerade

v2
She darkens the room
her face under veil
It hides her pain
Miss Masquerade
Her song takes control
She fascinates
So soon she will
Masquerade.

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[> Subject: Re: Miss Masquerade
Author: Arunansu [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 00:43:02 01/06/08 Sun Dear Sue, this is so beautiful. Cheers. [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Miss Masquerade
Author: andy [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 09:51:12 01/06/08 Sun Sue, Ah, the many masks we wear! I like how each verse is strung together yet can sit independently on their own. Your poem reads well and provokes thought as well. thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Miss Masquerade
Author: Sue [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 11:20:22 01/06/08 Sun Thank you, Arunansu. How so sweet of you to drop in. I very much appreciate your thoughts on this. Hi, Andy: this is a set of lyrics. Just received the demo that turned out fantastic. Thank you so much for your wonderful comment. [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Miss Masquerade
Author: andy [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 21:00:55 01/11/08 Fri Bump!!!!!!!!! [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Miss Masquerade
Author: Sasha [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 21:12:38 01/11/08 Fri ~ ohhhh I'm so glad that Andy bumped this one up again I missed it the first time 'round these are beautiful lyrics, sweet Sue... beautifully expressed, and haunting warm hugs Sash xx [ Post a Reply to This Message ]