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] Date Posted: 17:43:31 01/10/08 Thu Greetings! Love the look of this Motel - looks very comfy and has a great atmosphere about it. Please accept my humble offering of a few words of introduction - feeling I want you to pour yourself back into the mould so I can take you outside and wait for you to set. I will delicately take the brush and dip it in the colours on my pallette, paint the life back into you once again. I wish I could catch every one of your tears and string them together in a necklace of pearls, just so that I can show you that your sadness is as beautiful as every jewel adorned by Queens. I walk my life along the question marks that you left scattered so carelessly along the ground, and watch as everyone else tries to straighten them, but for me, I have no place in my heart for exclamation marks. Ash . [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Janel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:15:59 01/10/08 Thu Very beautiful write Ash, i much enjoyed the read. Janel [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 03:14:18 01/11/08 Fri Welcome great poem last line had a kick in it DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Bobby [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 17:00:02 01/11/08 Fri Beautiful verse Ash. Welcome to MMM and great entrance. I really enjoyed reading this and will be looking for more! Smiles! Bobby [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Ash [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:41:49 01/11/08 Fri Thank you Janel. Thanks DSL - indeed, not a lover of those! And good to meet you Bobby. Thank you for reading. I look forward to seeing you all around Ash [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:48:52 01/11/08 Fri I walk my life along the question marks that you left scattered so carelessly along the ground, and watch as everyone else tries to straighten them, but for me, I have no place in my heart for exclamation marks. Ash __________________________________________________________ Your closing stanza stands up well as a poem on its own. Your introduction is awesome. Thanks for posting your poetry with us. smiles, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |