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] Date Posted: 14:16:29 01/06/08 Sun Tired No way to escape this grey world Of dirty bricks and rageous engines Colors of roughcasts are weak To enlighten Coldness avenue, Tired Robotic dairy corrodes my home Perpetual echo clicks and ticks No exit can be seen from here None I'm able to catch from eyes Tired Emptiness defines this grey life No echo from the bed to snoring No eyes to dive in through mirrors No ears to catch the whispers of tears Tired Love never finds the doorbell Only crows peck at the windows Hidden behind lies and masks They sing the death of serenades. [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 17:09:39 01/06/08 Sun Your soul is such a deep river. You pen pain with grace and insight. I would love it Mir, if you could post a poem in both French and English sometime. You did that once at PC and I absolutely loved it. Hang in there superstar! Much love, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Janel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:25:15 01/06/08 Sun I can truly understand this dear Mir, every word I can relate to, was glad to see this posted here too. (huggs) Am feeling it deep. Janel [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 22:35:29 01/06/08 Sun I like the feel and the images of "crows peck at the windows". Excellent write. Cheers. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Bobby [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 17:59:19 01/07/08 Mon (((Mimi))) This one gets this reader in the heart and soul. Thanks for sharing your emo-spill! more hugs! Bobby [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:53:02 01/07/08 Mon Quote: __________________________________ Tired Love never finds the doorbell Only crows peck at the windows Hidden behind lies and masks They sing the death of serenades. __________________________________ ~ ohhhhh, now THIS is absolutely perfect!!!!! this part I've quoted stands so well on its own, even.. absolutely heart wrenching, dear one...I sooo feel this one *warm hugs* Sash xx  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:21:22 01/08/08 Tue  ~ I just had to come back and leave you a little something special, dear Mireille CONGRATULATIONS on this most deserved award!!!! I'm also hanging this one in its rightful place in the Muse Mongers Hall of Fame!!!  *warm hugs* Sash xx  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: AnneMarie [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 13:43:03 01/10/08 Thu This one strikes deep, hugs to you. Congrats on the award, you definitely deserve it. Hugs & Kisses, AnneMarie [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 16:49:07 01/10/08 Thu I find your words mesmerising my friend, something stark about them yet with a feminine softness. Peace and love, Paul. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 16:10:31 01/12/08 Sat  Read of the Day 12th January, 2008 Chosen by Janel CONGRATULATIONS on this honor, dear Mireille your poem now has the ROTD spotlight in MUSE MONGERS READ OF THE DAY!!!  *hugs* Sash xx  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |