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Subject: We


Author:
Good Knight (centric)
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Date Posted: 19:17:25 01/11/08 Fri

We
We ran to catch the sun,
We caught the rain!
We jumped to see how high,
We fell to earth!
We lived fulfill ourself,
We died instead!
We loved to have love,
We ended in hate!
We existed to have our pleasure,
We got a lot of pain!
We thought we would endure,
We were less than expected.
We saw the rainbow's end,
We found no gold!
We sought our future,
We found our past.
We expected our dreams true,
We only got old.
We wanted our life to be new,
We were disappointed.
We ran to catch the sun,
All we caught was cold!




GK Copyright c 3/77 All Rights Reserved/30 year old poem one of my first.

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[> Subject: Re: We


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 22:58:47 01/11/08 Fri




~ life is definitely a journey of contrasts isn't it

you've capture some of these here, I really enjoyed this one, GK

a pleasure ti read this tonight

*hugs*

Sash xx


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[> Subject: Re: We


Author:
Janel
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Date Posted: 23:01:35 01/11/08 Fri

I'm definitely feeling this one.
I enjoyed the journey of this. Very well done GK.

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[> Subject: Re: We


Author:
Arunansu
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Date Posted: 01:19:08 01/12/08 Sat

So True, Knight! Captured brilliantly.
Cheers.

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[> Subject: Re: We


Author:
Paul
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Date Posted: 04:33:31 01/12/08 Sat

GK, Great expession of something we all feel, and the ending pure class, as we have come to expect from your excellent pen.

Peace and hope,

Paul.

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[> Subject: Re: We


Author:
Good Knight
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Date Posted: 06:42:54 01/12/08 Sat

I humbly thank each one for replies to this small offer

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[> Subject: Re: We


Author:
andy
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Date Posted: 12:09:54 01/12/08 Sat



Much to ponder here in your verse!

Classic ending!

Enjoyed much!

thanks,
andy

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[> Subject: Re: We


Author:
Stormheart
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Date Posted: 16:42:48 01/12/08 Sat

Brilliantly penned! Such contradictions in this life, and you have captured it well...as always!

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