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] Date Posted: 15:14:12 01/14/08 Mon Babe’s First Graze He looks to the sky Tiny eyes glisten in the gleam Looks away It’s too bright, all too much, All too much for tiny eyes Overload and overspill, So this, this is real. He holds her hand and she coos but he’s quiet, all too quiet. He looks down to his first wound, No one can make this better, A three year old has had his eyes ripped wide open. [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 15:27:14 01/14/08 Mon Oh, the poetry of profound moments. Reading your poem is like looking at a Norman Rockewell painting. So very well done! Nice to see you back. thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Black Star [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:22:11 01/30/08 Wed Thank you for your lovley comment Andy, I feel very welcomed here :) Love Black Star [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Good Knight [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 16:14:34 01/14/08 Mon This one caught me off guard made me think well done Black Star [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Black Star [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:23:39 01/30/08 Wed I'm glad to make you think, thank you for the read. Love Black Star [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 20:02:01 01/14/08 Mon ~ awww bless his heart, I wanna give him a big cuddle... I love this one, sweet Champers you paint this scene perfectly, I could see it all so clearly it's awesome to see you back here again, honeybunch loving this poem!!! *warm hugs* Sash xx  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Black Star [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:24:57 01/30/08 Wed Thank you darling Sasha, you are always so kind. Love Black Star [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Janel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 20:30:30 01/14/08 Mon I read this three times and could truly picture it in my mind, made me think. Very profound write Black Star, i much enjoyed the read. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Black Star [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:26:07 01/30/08 Wed Thank you for your kindness, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Love Black Star [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 02:34:27 01/15/08 Tue You Look into those eyes and you can hear those thoughts as the tears fall great pen DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Black Star [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:27:21 01/30/08 Wed Thank you DSL, it's lovely to see familar faces here. Love Black Star [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: The Staff [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:12:54 01/30/08 Wed  Read of the Day 30th January, 2008 Chosen by Janel CONGRATUATIONS on this honor, dear Black Star your poem now has the ROTD spotlight in MUSE MONGERS READ OF THE DAY!!!   . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Black Star [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:29:43 01/30/08 Wed Wow thank you, I feel so honoured, I'm so pleased you enjoy this. Love Black Star [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:16:04 01/30/08 Wed  ~ **Clapping** Congratulations on ROTD, sweet Champers it's such a thrill to see this poem receive this honor way ta go, sweetie...love this!!! *hugs* Sash xx  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Black Star [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:30:40 01/30/08 Wed Thanks for the revisit Sash, I'm so amazed at the response :) Love Black Star [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Christine [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:30:26 01/30/08 Wed ((((~Chicklet~)))) So good to read you again! (And btw, happy very belated birthday!!) This is brilliant - the first loss of innocence, when a child realizes what hurt really is....and is inconsolable (and nothing is the same afterward). You rock! Congratulations on Janel's ROTD!!! ~Hugs~ [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Wilopent [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:55:43 01/30/08 Wed Congratulations, Black Star! I loved this poem, so tender and poignant a moment . . . captured with love. xoxo Wilopent [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 00:17:01 01/31/08 Thu A great, great read my friend. Enjoyed the piece. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |