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Subject: Mars (Don't ask mix)


Author:
darkerside of light
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Date Posted: 02:37:38 01/30/08 Wed

Mars(Don’t ask mix)

They come from mars
Three eyes
Missing fingers
With so many battle Scars

When they landed
They surrendered
Then they got disbanded
From tree top perches
In the churches to Cathedrals
The human race sang protect us from evil

They came from mars
Made love to our women
Smashing up the bars
Human race took the taxi
Three eyes one finger got to drive fast cars

In the distant alarm bells are ringing
We can hear three eyes singing

“Piggy, piggy, poo ,poo,
We are coming to get you
Smoky smoky bacon
Don’t be mistaken
Piggy, piggy, poo, poo,
We are coming to get you”


Three eyes said I have 10 trillion bucks
Let’s have some fun
The human race sucks
We have ammo bombs and many a gun
You can run
You can hide
It’s done

The human race did what it thought was right
Shut the door then turned out the light
Got round the table
Then hid under the table
Then ask for volunteers for the fight
There they stayed for ever and a night
People died
Held on to belief with pride
They asked for more volunteers for the fight
The human race stayed under the table for ever and a night


DSL

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[> Subject: Re: Mars (Don't ask mix)


Author:
andy
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Date Posted: 06:06:02 01/30/08 Wed



Quite the imagination here but in a metaphorical sense
I ride the wave right with you.

I never know what is awaiting me when I open
up your posts and that I do enjoy.

I see you made a contribution in the penthouse as well.LOL

Go get 'em brother----------

thanks,
andy

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[> [> Subject: Re: Mars (Don't ask mix)


Author:
darkerside of light
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Date Posted: 10:19:35 01/31/08 Thu

Hi Andy
Thanking you for those kind words, I have explained below to Sash where abit of the inspiration came from,
The rest of the poem is based on more deep Polytical thoughts.

DSL

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[> Subject: Re: Mars (Don't ask mix)


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 19:57:16 01/30/08 Wed



Quote:
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“Piggy, piggy, poo ,poo,
We are coming to get you
Smoky smoky bacon
Don’t be mistaken
Piggy, piggy, poo, poo,
We are coming to get you”
____________________________


~ LOL oh man this is funny, Mark...

not sure if that was your intent for the entire poem
but I found this part funny, it made me laugh, so thanks for that

*hugs*

Sash xx


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[> [> Subject: Re: Mars (Don't ask mix)


Author:
darkerside of light
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Date Posted: 10:15:37 01/31/08 Thu

Hi Sash

the truth is I was playing with the kids at home at being the big bad wolf and the children were the piglets and as I chased them this just slipped out of my mouth, I just didn't want to waste it.

DSL

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[> Subject: Re: Mars (Don't ask mix)


Author:
Paul
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Date Posted: 12:56:28 01/31/08 Thu

Mark,

There is always an edge to your poetry that leaves us wondering, this is just fantastic, because we all know that we would hid under the table....or behind the settee! Hahahahahaha. Top write my friend,

Peace and love,

Paul

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