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Subject: From Jessica's Sonnet Challenge


Author:
Mick
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Date Posted: 20:03:07 01/30/08 Wed




One Night

bar
beers
Cheers!
car

far
away eyes
thighs
bar

bar
thighs
eyes
car
sighs
prize!


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[> Subject: Re: From Jessica's Sonnet Challenge


Author:
andy
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Date Posted: 04:55:37 01/31/08 Thu



LOL!

Just goes to show you the power
of something that appears to be
so simple until you take a real
good look at what is offered up.

Very cool!

thanks,
andy

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[> Subject: Re: From Jessica's Sonnet Challenge


Author:
Max Hardy
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Date Posted: 08:23:38 01/31/08 Thu

Hello Mick

Read.
Laughed.
Succinct.
Warm.
Wry.
Wonderful.

Max

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[> Subject: Re: From Jessica's Sonnet Challenge


Author:
Paul
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Date Posted: 13:19:22 01/31/08 Thu

Mick,

What I have come to know through reading you is that you are consumate and efficient in your poetry.This economical spill really made my day! Still laughing with respect,

Peace and hope,

Paul

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[> Subject: Re: From Jessica's Sonnet Challenge


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 13:28:04 01/31/08 Thu




~ well, my dear friend Mick...

**clears throat** speaking for the girls..REPRESENT!!!!! LOL

this poem is one of those that tells it from both sides of the coin...

being a man thighs girl, m'self...lol

anyway...I thoroughly enjoyed this piece, hon

I'm so glad I get to read you here

*warm hugs*

Sash xx


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[> Subject: Re: From Jessica's Sonnet Challenge


Author:
Jess
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Date Posted: 16:00:46 02/01/08 Fri

Mick,
I'm so glad you decided to play in my challenge! I was hoping for something just like what you gave, completely inventive and new...

You're a Maverick, my friend, and a totally fab writer.

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[> Subject: Re: From Jessica's Sonnet Challenge


Author:
Mick
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Date Posted: 16:45:47 02/01/08 Fri

Thanks all for the comments. I have written a grand total of one sonnet. This piece was meant to be a humorous look at events long since past and a poke at my ineptness at this form.

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[> Subject: Re: From Jessica's Sonnet Challenge


Author:
Wilopent
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Date Posted: 06:18:27 02/02/08 Sat

Hi Mick,
Such a talented writer you are! I love when so few words can paint so clear a vision in the mind. In an instant I went back to the days when the back seat of a car was synonomous with a bar prize! Fonzie ruled the day! ( And perhaps he still does!) Thoroughly enjoyed your perspective in this little "guy stroll".
xoxo
Wilopent

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