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Subject: Daydream Moments


Author:
Christine
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Date Posted: 21:45:05 01/30/08 Wed


imaginary lines cross in the corrugation of a word;
a sentence that releases your tongue and, ah!
such a barrage of creases splayed, not unconsummated,
with tattered wings; aloft and listing


your lost love notes still warm and constant,
shine sweetly, still lusting
for a warm mouth, skin so soft
and I am serenaded in the temptation that you paint
venturing to step beyond my mind’s flight


there I am, lain upon the canvas
where you first fell into the muse’s summons
when daydream moments fell in an undulation of
tempest winds


witness me as I am the weakest
in my need of your touch,
gentle or tempted with unforgiving razings
.......it doesn’t matter.....


it’s still all the same in tantric whispers...
just a wish, a yearn, a blush lullaby
.........waiting......


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[> Subject: Re: Daydream Moments


Author:
Arunansu
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Date Posted: 00:14:19 01/31/08 Thu

OUTSTANDING! Right from the first line, it has been a experience to remember, and when I arrived at "tantric whispers", I felt I HAVE learned something.

Cheers.

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[> [> Subject: Re: Daydream Moments


Author:
Christine
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Date Posted: 11:57:39 02/04/08 Mon

((((~Arunansu~))))

Thank you for the vote of confidence and thank you for reading me here! You rock!!

~Hugs~

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[> Subject: Re: Daydream Moments


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 01:32:51 01/31/08 Thu



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it’s still all the same in tantric whispers...
just a wish, a yearn, a blush lullaby
.........waiting......
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~ feeling' the all consuming ache of yearning in this one

such a beautifully penned poem, Chris...love it!!!!
looks like your muse is well and truly back, and has blossomed



*hugs*

Sash xx

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[> [> Subject: Re: Daydream Moments


Author:
Christine
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Date Posted: 12:00:53 02/04/08 Mon

~Sash~

"looks like your muse is well and truly back, and has blossomed"

Thank you for the welcome back. As for my muse, that fickle creature we all know, laid low for a while and just absorbed life's events. But blossoming? The muse bloomed a long time ago...it is the sweetest petals I pick now!

~Hugs~

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[> Subject: Re: Daydream Moments


Author:
darkerside of light
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Date Posted: 01:53:07 01/31/08 Thu

Whhhhhooooooooaaaaaa oh yes
more please

DSL

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[> [> Subject: Re: Daydream Moments


Author:
Christine
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Date Posted: 12:01:53 02/04/08 Mon

"Whhhhhooooooooaaaaaa oh yes
more please"

For you sir, yes!



~Hugs~

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[> Subject: Re: Daydream Moments


Author:
andy
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Date Posted: 04:52:13 01/31/08 Thu



Smiling here this morning hot stuff!

I am so very happy to be reading you again.

Your skills are more and more refined all the time.
I don't really pay much attention to what you
say about your own poetry. You can write and
I'll keep reading it an forming my own opinions.

I'm sure I will revisit this a few times today.

Way to lay it down Superstar!

Nice to have you back,
andy

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[> [> Subject: Re: Daydream Moments


Author:
Christine
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Date Posted: 12:03:57 02/04/08 Mon

Andy -

You smile me all the time, in spite of your opinions...hehehe

Thank you for the welcome, thank you for reading me!

~Hugs~

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[> Subject: Re: Daydream Moments


Author:
Jess
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Date Posted: 14:55:13 01/31/08 Thu

Christine,
I pretty much love this!
And though I'm late, I had to be late-er just to find an award to give ya!

This really touched me, and gave me a much-needed smile. Thanks!

Jessica

And here you are:

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[> [> Subject: Re: Daydream Moments


Author:
Christine
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Date Posted: 12:05:51 02/04/08 Mon

(((((~Jess~)))))

Wow! Under Love's Sky Award! I am swooning..

Thank you for your touch and your smiles!



~Hugs~

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[> Subject: Re: Daydream Moments


Author:
Staff
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Date Posted: 21:51:59 01/31/08 Thu






Your poem has now been placed in the


Muse Mongers Awards Hall









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[> [> Subject: Re: Daydream Moments


Author:
Christine
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Date Posted: 12:07:25 02/04/08 Mon

Thank you, O Powers of MMM, for granting me entrance to the Awards Hall!! You rock me (but then again, you knew that!)

~XOXO~ (Yeah, to both of you!)

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[> Subject: Re: Daydream Moments


Author:
AnneMarie
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Date Posted: 09:49:00 02/01/08 Fri

"it�s still all the same in tantric whispers...
just a wish, a yearn, a blush lullaby
.........waiting......"

Ooh the yearning...You definitely nailed this one. Mega Congrats on the much deserved award.

Hugs and Kisses,
AnneMarie

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[> Subject: Re: Daydream Moments


Author:
Lily
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Date Posted: 18:55:27 02/01/08 Fri

witness me as I am the weakest
in my need of your touch,


lovely pour Christine.. congrats on the ascendence to love's sky and the hall of honour..


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