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] Date Posted: 01:31:30 01/25/08 Fri You know you are in trouble It’s getting late Drank so much The night is not over You know you are in trouble You are still stone cold sober Yes you know you are in trouble In trouble You are in trouble I’m staring at a the rear end of a bus and her mate I can no longer be fussed The mate has nice legs for a piece of jail bait I’m not going home alone I can no longer be fussed I’ll take the mate If I can’t take her it’s the bus Yes you know you are in trouble In trouble You are in trouble When she calls you by name And not by pet You been in the same room all day The look in those eyes never change Saying I wish we had never met Yes you know you are in trouble In trouble You are in trouble You come down the stairs To find no place at the dinner table You are in trouble Then when you go to bed There’s a body waiting for you So cold She must be clinically dead You are in trouble Oh yes In trouble Oh yes Don’t you know you are in trouble! DSL [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 02:39:13 01/25/08 Fri Brilliant DSL, you deserve two thumbs up! [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 09:05:51 01/28/08 Mon Dear Arunansu A mixture of truth and fiction and I let the bus go too and chose to walk and sat on the beach and watch the sunrise on my own. Cheers DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 03:10:08 01/25/08 Fri Mark, The reality of this is quite telling, and must happen all over the world. Your gritty take on life is sometimes uncomfortable, but always compelling. Brilliant, Peace and hope, Paul. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 09:09:45 01/28/08 Mon Hi Paul thanking you I write as much about what I see as much what happens to me truth and fiction sleep well togther. DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: tcn [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 17:09:19 01/25/08 Fri Whoa! Still reeling from this excellent piece of writing. Raw and powerful! Well done! Chilling! [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 09:15:45 01/28/08 Mon Hi tcn I was on holiday in Spain in a night club and I notice what could be described as a gang end of buses is a bit cruel but they were there for the taking I chose not too at 7.OO am I took my self and John Thomas to watch the sun rise. Thanking you DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: AnneMarie [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 07:30:14 01/26/08 Sat Wow...very chilling write~excellent portrait for sure. Good job. Hugs, AnneMarie [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 09:19:02 01/28/08 Mon Hi AnneMarie As I have said a mixture of truth and fiction no room at the table bit I'll leave you all guessing Cheers and thanking you for the time you have shown me DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:28:09 01/26/08 Sat ~ well, Mark, if HE doesn't know he's in trouble, I sure as hell know!!!! LOL sounds like he enjoyed life on the edge, either that, or he's avoiding "reality" and living in a booze induced fantasy...met a few of them in my time, too...lol this one definitely stopped me cold well done, my friend *hugs* Sash xx  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 09:22:22 01/28/08 Mon Hi Sash Yes I have drunk myself cold stone sober the rest is history stroke story DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 08:57:29 01/28/08 Mon Mark, Paul's point is a valid one but I have so much respect for the places your poetry travels to. You take me on rides that aren't unfamiliar at all. They are all common strings that make us what we are. It's so awesome to have such a community of voices here; each that lends another shade to the colors of our days. I for one, really look forward to your take on all things because you don't hold back at all and that deserves admiration from anyone who has a sincere passion for the written word. Well, this has been a worthy stop this morning. I thank you and all the others for joining us here and for helping us bring The Motel to life. my best, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 09:28:07 01/28/08 Mon Hi andy Thanking you from the bottom of my heart the day I fear no longer what I write If I don't feel the following Fear,sadness,regret,truth and tougue in cheek followed by the buzz and any other emotions that rush through me at the time, if I ever feel nothing then I will break my pen in half Cheers DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |