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] Date Posted: 19:06:55 01/27/08 Sun My fingers clench and cling in the silent query of flourishing dances to where I haunt the questions that lay unanswered.... Will you dance in the well of my desire flush from intention and bloom in my garden where tended, each thorn and petal clinging to the dew that your touch unleashes? Or should I ask the stranger of your soul where a parched throat would sing in tears and rain, deafened by fate’s soliloquy? Fragile and muffled, aching whispers fall in rolling syllables off your tongue and past the point where sedition rules your seductive mouth onto the shadowed flesh of my shoulder Bruise-kisses hide the blood welling of each bite hidden on the peach where it lies fragrant and ripe waiting to be plucked, reborn I stand before you raw, exposed to nature’s seasons naked between the veils of intoxication and resurrection waiting for an answer that is only felt and always unspoken.... [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 20:48:46 01/27/08 Sun ~ oh, the yearning for that which remains unspoken so beautifully poured here, Chris... so lovely to read you here again *hugs* Sash xx ![]() . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Christine [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:51:44 01/30/08 Wed Thanks Sash! So glad to be back, too! ~Hugs~ [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 00:31:19 01/28/08 Mon Hello Christine It's so, so good to read your wonderful words again. The silence here is singing in shades of a yearning desire that is palpable, and wrought with a simmering, timorous passion. Loved this so much. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Christine [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:53:41 01/30/08 Wed (((~Max~))) Thank you for those kind words and welcome back! Glad you enjoyed all the simmering *grins*... ~Hugs~ [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 01:46:26 01/28/08 Mon I may hve got this wrong but what I see is a young lady Who loves a man who dosn't know it, so well put to the pen with imagery that you can see and smell DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Christine [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:54:44 01/30/08 Wed (((~DSL~))) Brava! How like you to see right thru the layers....thank you! ~Hugs~ [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 04:37:43 01/28/08 Mon Well, I see your poetry hasn't suffered from all the abuse you put the rest of you through. On second thought, (speaking from experience) that's where the poetry comes from. From the livin' of the life for sure. Your pen is potent. I will have to read this again later today to fully absorb it and that in itself means it's a poem of some substance. Good to have you back Christine. andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Christine [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:58:10 01/30/08 Wed ((((~Andy~)))) The poetry has suffered right along with me, but I think it's better because of it. Absorbing me, huh? Hmmmm.....sounds like.....*laughing*.... Thank you for reading me, sir! ~Hugs~ [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Wilopent [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 06:43:40 01/29/08 Tue Such lonesome yearning you've painted in this passionate piece, Christine. Very well done, indeed. xoxo Wilopent [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Christine [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:59:51 01/30/08 Wed ((~Wilopent~)) "Lonesome yearning"....my, how you inspire me! Thank you! ~Hugs~ [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Janel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:10:29 01/29/08 Tue This is absolutely gorgeous Christine, your words truly touched me tonight. Loving it immensely. (Huggs) [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Christine [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:01:04 01/30/08 Wed ((((~Janel~)))) You gorgeous woman, you! If I can touch you, I have done my job here! Thank you! ~Hugs~ [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |