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Subject: Night Falls


Author:
Wilopent
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Date Posted: 14:27:35 01/28/08 Mon

Teardrop

Down tufts on a pillow

an eyelash

bathed in tears

soft against white linen

erasing all the years.

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[> Subject: Re: Night Falls


Author:
Paul
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Date Posted: 15:04:02 01/28/08 Mon

Wilo,

Not sure what happened to your picture, but I love the poem.Simple yet so vivid. You have an amazing talent my sweet friend,

Peace and love,

Paul

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[> [> Subject: Re: Night Falls


Author:
Wilopent
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Date Posted: 15:55:39 01/28/08 Mon

Hi Paul,
That's the picture. I looked for a tear on lashes . . .Oh well, Anyway, so glad you liked my little verse. Thank you for reading.
I'll try to change the pic . . . i have something else that might work better. As you can see . . . I do love to add a visual when I find one!
Hugs,
Wilo

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[> Subject: Re: Night Falls


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 19:30:45 01/28/08 Mon




~ ohhh Joanne, I found this on my travels and thought you might like it *smiles*

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I love this poem...beautifully succinct
and succinctly beautiful :)

I love how your words fall so softly to the page

*hugs*

Sash xx


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[> [> Subject: Re: Night Falls


Author:
Wilopent
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Date Posted: 06:16:22 01/29/08 Tue

Hi Sash,
That happens to be the exact picture I posted! Don't know why it didn't come through for me. Maybe I have too many pics in my album.
So kind of you! See how in sync you are with everyone here? You truly are an angel.
Hugs,
Joanne

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Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 16:27:45 01/30/08 Wed



~ ohh wow, Joanne...how cool that it's the same one...

that's wicked, I love that!!!

*hugs*

Sash xx



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[> Subject: Re: Night Falls


Author:
Arunansu
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Date Posted: 23:36:49 01/28/08 Mon

Wilopent,
vivid images. Enjoyed the read.

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[> [> Subject: Re: Night Falls


Author:
Wilopent
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Date Posted: 06:17:39 01/29/08 Tue

Thank you, Arunansu!
xoxo
Wilopent

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[> Subject: Re: Night Falls


Author:
Max Hardy
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Date Posted: 01:05:13 01/29/08 Tue

Hello Wilo

The comforting, cosseting nature of that warm inviting pillow holds the memories of a thousand heartaches, so vividly captured here. Just stunning.

Max

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[> [> Subject: Re: Night Falls


Author:
Wilopent
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Date Posted: 06:19:42 01/29/08 Tue

Hi Max,
I so appreciate your kind comments.
Thank you,
Wilo

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[> Subject: Re: Night Falls


Author:
andy
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Date Posted: 03:33:47 01/29/08 Tue



Wilo,

The essence of your short poem whispers
off the screen. It's elegant and graceful
and leaves me with a wanting for more.

best,
andy

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[> [> Subject: Re: Night Falls


Author:
Wilopent
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Date Posted: 06:22:31 01/29/08 Tue

Thank you Andy.
So glad you caught the whisper. That's how I intended it to be read!
Hugs,
Wilo

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