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] Date Posted: 08:25:54 01/28/08 Mon In reply to: tcn 's message, "Queen Of The Forest" on 17:09:49 01/25/08 Fri I am always attracted to your poetic phrasing but more than that it the subtle poignancy you offer that always seems to leave me with something more than I arrived with. This is wonderful: "As I stare into her blue-green eyes that spell out a portion of our history, I am honored to be her mother. A young woman is painting a pattern of birds and mythical bunnies. And I know that even in a group she will manage to travel alone." < First off, the idea that a Mother is honored to be just that, a MOM, is such a touching thought. Beyond that the vivid image of your daughter traveling alone is a crowd speaks volumes and takes up more space in a mind than it could ever take up on a page. I love layers in poetry and you give them up in multitudes. Touching and truly a life poem worthy of a keepsake for the both of you. For those that read it well, it's a treat to fall into. thanks, andy [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |