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] Date Posted: 05:53:20 01/11/08 Fri The pencil etches a copy of what the eyes can see, but captures in perfection the imperfections unseen. An alert ear, awake catches a thousand whispers, spoken into a wind of deceit, which blows from mouth to mouth. I will shout no longer, nor cry, for my tears run wasted, into a vast ocean of unlove, where waves crash on foreign shores. Instead I take a delicate thread, and stitch closed lips, ears, all senses that may wilt under the rays of your destructive tongue. [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 06:35:11 01/11/08 Fri this pen does have a unique style enjoyed DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Ash [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 06:50:35 01/11/08 Fri Many thanks for your reading DSL, appreciation much welcomed. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 22:15:56 01/11/08 Fri Quote: __________________________________ Instead I take a delicate thread, and stitch closed lips, ears, all senses that may wilt under the rays of your destructive tongue. __________________________________ ~ omgosh, how this one speaks to me, Ash it is so damned good to have you here with us, my friend I'll be back to this one :) *hugs* Sash xx  [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 12:12:04 01/12/08 Sat What a graceful, giving pen, you yield. Wonderful title too. So nice to have you here amongst us. thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Ash [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 23:09:43 01/12/08 Sat Hi Sash Thanks! All the better when someone is able to relate to what you say. It is great to be here - you have made a comfy establishment for sure! Ash [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Ash [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 23:11:42 01/12/08 Sat Hi Andy Sometimes the ink in that pen doesn`t flow very well and the muse ponders more than writes :) Thank you for your kind words and warm welcome Ash [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 17:59:08 01/26/08 Sat  Read of the Day 26th January, 2008 Chosen by Sasha CONGRATUATIONS on this honor, dear Ash your poem now has the ROTD spotlight in MUSE MONGERS READ OF THE DAY!!!  *hugs* Sash xx  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Jess [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:46:36 01/26/08 Sat Ash, I truly love this image, and the sensory way you put it together. It was  More of those! Jess [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 23:25:27 01/26/08 Sat Dear Ash, This was marvellous and powerful. Congratulations for getting the well deserved ROTD award. Cheers. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 00:24:47 01/28/08 Mon Hello Ash Strong in words, in sentiment, emotion and execution. Just so powerfully penned with an elemental honesty. Loved this. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 04:44:49 01/28/08 Mon Just read this again. The way this poem travels down the page and expands itself into the mind is wonderful. So very well done! thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Wilopent [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 05:22:41 01/28/08 Mon Hi Ash, I love the honesty and unblinded emotions you so beautifully captured with your words. Congratulations! xoxo Wilopent [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |