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] Date Posted: 01:09:19 01/23/08 Wed  I watch the routine rise of a blazing diamond behind Stonehenge. Years engraved along furrows of my ribcage, resemble the prehistoric earthwork. Lonely afternoon strolls, chilly winds seep through my thinning hair. Days empty, bordered by an opening tag in the east, and a closing tag in the west; I keep looking eastward. [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 02:35:33 01/23/08 Wed I love the ribcage line and boy I did need this refreshing pen today like no other. DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 03:39:26 01/23/08 Wed Thank u so much , DSL. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:16:14 01/23/08 Wed ~ I loved how this poem made me feel when I read it it felt like a soul soothing moment in time frozen forever in a breathtaking picture...love it! *hugs* Sash xx  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Janel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:19:30 01/23/08 Wed i have read this twice so far Arun, and it is truly inspiring, the picture and words leave my soul in awe... love it. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 03:36:30 01/24/08 Thu Arunansu, You truly astound me everytime my friend. This is superb as a stand alone poem, yet for those of us who have been fortunate enough to visit Stonehenge and feel the vibe, ((((Shudders)))) You just get better and better, Peace and love, Paul. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 13:15:33 01/24/08 Thu Stonehenge is a giant gate opening to all hopes and dreams, and such kind of beautiful lines. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 22:27:54 01/24/08 Thu Thank you, everyone. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: AnneMarie [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 07:48:28 01/26/08 Sat Your words and this picture are beyond amazing...This one definitely leaves an imprint and lingers. Hugs, AnneMarie [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Destiny [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 15:55:13 01/26/08 Sat Arunansu Wonderful to see you here MMM. It is always wonderful to meet up with Friend, not seen for a while..I have missed you since I left the Castle. I have been to Stonehenge many times... I remember the days before it was cordoned off, when you could touch it. The stone felt cold but filled with an inner warmth. It has such an Aura and magnetism...A very Spiritual place Indeed...One can almost see those Pagan rituals taking place from Eons Ago. It is just so captivating and precious. sad it had to be fenced off but it has to be preserved. This is wonderful poem ..You captured the essence so well ((Hug)) Destiny [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |