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] Date Posted: 14:29:07 01/27/08 Sun One Love I married you my princes From another nation Way above my station She’s a princess At the time I was a mess We were married with in three month The wedding only cost two hundred quid My princes wore a second hand dress From Barnardo’s Yes that’s right From Banardo’s Young completely broke and in love that’s the way the story goes Thirteen years A million tears I just wanted I want You to be happy With or with out me I know this does sound crazy Some where out there There are men walking taller Than I’ll ever be I just want to see you happy I want you to be free To be free Oh yes All I want to see you happy I do what can Far from perfect So many excuses I can think of as man We have cried To the blood in us run dry To keep the truth we had I know I’ve lied Watch our own creation live and die Point the crooked finger Ask the question Dear lord Us Why? I just wanted you to be happy With or with out me I want you to feel free With or with out me I will always love you I wish I could show it so you could see This is the man I will always be. Baby you don't know it You are for ever free DSL [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:32:35 01/27/08 Sun ~ so much pain, and so little self belief, in this character if they can hold onto the love, and all the happy memories perhaps it will carry them through the hard times... thank you for sharing this one, Mark...can't help but feel this one *hugs* Sash xx  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 01:38:46 01/28/08 Mon Hi Sash This is a toughy as you know I can write about life and when it comes to punches I don't hold back. Marriage is not easy the biggest undrstatement there will ever be, Sticking two people together and expecting them to love one and other for the rest of their natural lifes is the biggest ask for any humanbeing. I am not perfect oh noooooooooooo, Faults toooooooooo many. So when the I don't come to scratch and I'm feeling close to the edge I have been known to say "I can't be the man you want I would be come a fake or even a fraud to do so, But over the years i have change a bit here and there now I also know there are men out there who out class me they do things and alot better than I cold ever dream to be, If that's what your looking for go and find with my blessing nobody will be more happy than me when you find the right man and I will love you always" And that is the one love Yes some may think easier said than done I have done this once before and that partner went on to ahave a very happy married life the last time I saw her she was expecting twins. Cheers Sash DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 00:27:26 01/28/08 Mon Hello DSL There's a battle raging there inside, between the guy that carries a candle, and the guy that carries a knife. Deep and forthright insights in this mind indded, so eloquently penned. Feeling the struggles in this one my friend. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 01:42:07 01/28/08 Mon Good Morning Max Thanking you for your time and kind comments,I left a very long message just above with Sash that may cast some light on the poem. All the best DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 04:41:14 01/28/08 Mon Oh, what we have here is so much more common than anyone cares to admit. I know all too well of these feelings. True and worthy intent and a great commitment can often lead to a lonely corner and great questions. I have no answers so I won't pretend that I do. All I can say is I applaud your the fearless pen. You have my respect for delving deep and expressing what many others fail to even face. best, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 05:53:25 01/28/08 Mon Sad but so true. I guess many many others feel the same. Written beautifully. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |