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Subject: Never

Author:
Darkerside of light

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Date Posted: 03:26:06 01/10/08 Thu

Never

I never planned this

No

Never

I look back and see you in that second hand wedding dress
Glowing so beautiful

Never planned this

The pregnancies

Josh

His death

How could we account for this?

From big

To little sister

Plans

Such great plans

We become wife
We become husband
At times both fail to love
To understand

We make choices
Hobson choices

Finding ourselves
For what ever
When ever
In the land of never

DSL

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[> Subject: Re: Never
Author: Max Hardy [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 10:07:34 01/10/08 Thu Hello DSL 'Never I never planned this No Never ' And in life, as you so succinctly capture, it's hobson's choice, or, a plan from somewhere else perhaps. Wish that somewhere else would let us in on it just a bit though! Good to see you bakc my friend, hope you had a good time on your holidays. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 10:23:58 01/10/08 Thu Hi Max I had a great holiday thanks. I'm pleased you understand this poem,it was a painful write I have written easier words Cheers DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Never
Author: AnneMarie [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 12:03:51 01/10/08 Thu Very emotional, raw in its sadness/pain. Just as in life, it's full of unexpected twists and turns. Excellent job! Hugs, AnneMarie [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 01:15:48 01/11/08 Fri Hi AnneMarie Normaly I write a poem I tend to almost forget it as soon as it's been posted but this is haunting me in my thoughts and will so for a while. Thanking you DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Never
Author: Paul [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 16:57:26 01/10/08 Thu Dear Mark, one thing I have come to know about you, is the honesty with which you write, painful as much of it is, you never bulk at getting it to the page. Excellent work my friend, Peace and love, paul. [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 01:19:45 01/11/08 Fri Hi Paul Yes you are right i do put thoughts fears and my life story to the page as much as it does help me, I wonder if slowly destroying or undoing my self in the process. Cheers DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

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Author: Janel [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 20:51:26 01/10/08 Thu Can truly feel the ache in this Dsl, i understand it being painful to write but am glad you were able to express it. (huggs) Am feeling it deep. Janel [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 02:46:40 01/11/08 Fri Hi Janel Thanking you DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Never
Author: Arunansu [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 21:41:04 01/10/08 Thu This is one of those works brings out a sigh from one's heart. Warmly written, DSL. [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 02:50:04 01/11/08 Fri Hi Arunansu Thanking you for the time you took out to read Cheers DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Never
Author: The Staff [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 16:16:53 01/24/08 Thu Read of the Day 24th January, 2008 Chosen by Janel CONGRATUATIONS on this honor, dear DSL your poem now has the ROTD spotlight in MUSE MONGERS READ OF THE DAY!!! . [ Post a Reply to This Message ]