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] Date Posted: 13:02:55 01/18/08 Fri Probably one of my last time I wrote first in French to make an English version later. For me, my friend. Sing along, My friend poet, This song for me Sweet-scented flowers that perfume Their heads swaying the tepid breeze Blooms where bees are gathering nectar In the fields ready for harvests, Seal for me Friend, the despair And the torment flourish so well On the bars of the prisons for reason And in the trenches on the battlefields Blow freedom winds in the jail, My friend poet Paint for me The rainbow and the prism Friend, they hold all the colors And the infra and the ultra That only ether is able to see Intermingle the hanks And create sumptuous paintings, Cry with and for me My friend poet The last flight of the beloved The mother, the brother or the lover Who is no more but the absent With the tears make a river That takes away my ultimate gift. Pour moi, mon ami. Chante, Poète mon ami Chante pour moi Les fleurs qui exhalent et parfument Leurs têtes que berce la brise tiède Les boutons que butinent les abeilles Dans les champs nourrissiers, Scelle pour moi, Le désespoir et le tourment Ami, ils fleurissent si bien Aux barreaux des prisons de raison Et dans les tranchées des champs de bataille Souffle des vents de liberté dans la cage, Paint, Poète mon ami Paint pour moi L'arc-en-ciel et le prisme Ami, ils portent toutes les couleurs Et l'infra et l'ultra Que seul l'éther peut voir Entremêle les écheveaux Pour créer de somptueux tableaux, Pleure avec et pour moi Ami, le dernier envol de l'être aimé La mère, le frère ou l'amant Qui n'est plus que l'absent Avec les larmes coule des rivières Qui emportent ma dernière offrande. [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:21:43 01/18/08 Fri Mireille, It is indeed an honour to be the first to comment upon this piece. The more I read you the more I see the beauty of your soul and the finesse of your pen, This is truly stunning, Peace and love, paul [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 10:29:35 01/19/08 Sat Wow, Paul, gonna be blushing hard... thank you very very much for your kindness. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 01:03:40 01/19/08 Sat Emotion potrayed brilliantly. A great write. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 10:30:03 01/19/08 Sat Thank you very much Aru. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Bobby [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 05:20:08 01/19/08 Sat So touching this is Mimi! The ending part especially just blew me away. Amazing piece of poetry my friend!! WOW! hugs! Bobby [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 10:31:48 01/19/08 Sat You're too sweet Bobby, I'm glad you enjoyed this old one. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 03:18:22 01/20/08 Sun Mir, This poem is for the true poet. The good spirit of the ages is alive and well in your words. A treat to read you as always. Just love it! And I that French tickles my (no I will not say fancy) toes. thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:39:57 01/20/08 Sun Thank you so very much Andy.. well, no more French for you.. not the place here for...lol ! [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 16:12:55 01/20/08 Sun ~ sweet Mireille, I believe this is my new fave by you, hon ab-soul-utely gorgeous poetry and so very beautifully written, dear one... I really love this!!!! *warm hugs* Sash xx  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 13:36:00 01/21/08 Mon I wrote few poet's poems, tho, I'm glad people like them. Thanks so very much sweet Sash. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Lily [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:16:55 01/21/08 Mon love the image of freedom wind blowing through the jail. this is fine piece of poésie. poetry does all this and more if we open our eyes and hearts. éloges à votre stylo Mireille.. ~Lis [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 12:57:07 01/24/08 Thu Thank you very much Lily, indeed, it's important that poems have some impact on the reader. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 01:00:34 01/22/08 Tue Hello Mireille Such a calming beauty, and appreciation of friendship flowing from your words, in the light and in the dark of our lives. Wonderful. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 12:57:59 01/24/08 Thu Thank you Max, very much, glad you felt it. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 05:34:51 01/23/08 Wed where can I go after reading such a pen like this? I know the floor......thud! DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 12:58:50 01/24/08 Thu No need to fall, DSL, really.. just breathe. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |