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] Date Posted: 09:12:25 01/17/08 Thu *This poem comes from last spring, Sasha has asked me to post it here as many will not have seen it before, I hope you enjoy it....Paul x) See them hanging , Crystal hearts in hollow ribs, Reflecting the sadness of times lost, As tears mist the facets, A spectrum of emotions fall, like rainbows of the soul, Cold hues striking a note with me, Why is blue so sad? Where did all the purples and yellows go? Is life really a one way street, Or can we re-live the good times over, I watch the crystal hearts, Swinging in those hollow ribcages, Feeling every searing ache, The reflection looks familiar, I recognise my features looking back at me, Resonating in time with life, When happiness held no boundaries, And hearts beat free of pain, In yesterdays light, © Paul Osborne 2007 [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 11:03:37 01/17/08 Thu I can see why Sasha asked for you posted it here. It's really beautiful and thoughtful. Thanks for the share, Paul. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:14:18 01/17/08 Thu ~ I absolutely loved reading this one again, Paulie the imagery so very haunting, sorrowful, yet beautiful I love when you spread your poetic wings, hon...love this!!! *hugs* Sash xx  [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 15:44:44 01/17/08 Thu Paul, This is rich in both its separation from others almost to lonely and its message that we all have so much in common. Nice to read you out of the rhyme mode. Although, I don't get tired of that either. thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 04:33:09 01/18/08 Fri Yes I can see such spectrums too, in your write. Great one! Cheers. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Janel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:02:06 01/19/08 Sat I'm do glad you posted this here Paul, truly is a wonderful and very touching read. Am feeling you my friend. (Huggs) Janel [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Stormheart [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 10:58:40 01/20/08 Sun I'm so glad you posted this! What a hauntingly beautiful piece of work! The depth of feeling is rich, and familiarity catches the reader by surprise! This is absolutely gorgeous! [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 03:31:40 01/21/08 Mon Mireille, Heehee, I know! that woman is ALWAYS right! Hahahahaha. Love your visits my cross channel friend. Peace and love, Paul [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 03:36:24 01/21/08 Mon Sash, I was doubtful, when you asked me to re-post this, as it had been at the castle,Yet as usual you proved a good judge, and I love that in you, Love and hugs, Paul. xx [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 03:40:15 01/21/08 Mon Andy, This piece was written after I watched a funeral pass me by whilst out one day, the sorrow of those in the cars was so evident, that it drew me into their grief. Thank you for taking the time with this one, peace and hope, Paul. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 03:44:43 01/21/08 Mon Arunansu, I never tire of of where my mind takes me. Your comments are always welcome my friend. Peace and hope, Paul. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 03:46:41 01/21/08 Mon Janel, Your visits brighten a fellows day, and knowing that this touched you means a great deal to me, Peace and hugs, paul. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 03:51:38 01/21/08 Mon Shannon, Careful girl, you will be making me blush! I actually like this poem myself, and may include it in my recital package for this year.Thank you for being so lovely, Peace and love, Paul. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mick [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 15:12:39 01/21/08 Mon Outstanding Paul, "Why is blue so sad?" - indeed. Excellent pen. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:03:34 01/21/08 Mon Mick, Your endorsement means a great deal to me. Glad that you found it a write to enjoy, Peace and hope, Paul [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 00:43:48 01/22/08 Tue Hello Paul Draped with such thoughs of sadness, your words evoke the passing, yet shine the crystals into the remembrance of a yesterday that smiled as the close. Simply stunning. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 05:38:19 01/23/08 Wed If you don't read this at poets party I will do something but what I don't know so you better......please DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 15:59:53 01/23/08 Wed Max, When a poet of your stature comes to comment and then leaves me with a smile, I realise all was not in vain. Thank you my friend, Peace, Paul [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 16:02:02 01/23/08 Wed Owwww! Let go of my arm Mark!!! No! No! Not the Chinese burn!!! I promise I will read it....Just as long as you let me play with the microphone? LOL Making me smile mate! Paul. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |