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] Date Posted: 18:20:03 01/20/08 Sun BEJEWELED If tomorrow had never happened, and yesterday was just a dream, would time become a color? A velvety blanket of onyx, surrounded by shimmering borealis veils? An ebon tapestry, rich with jeweltone bursts of color, lighting the future, reflecting the past. If we look through future memories' lens, we see ruby moments of love woven with sapphire acts of kindness. The amber of warm friendships mingled with emerald moments of nature's communion. Opaline threads of spiritual awareness interlaced with diamond hard lessons of grief... Such is the pattern of our life. It is up to us to weave our own tapestries, and set in them jewels full of fire, ablaze with color to rival the heavens... display them proudly, for they are our own... and they will be our shroud when we die... so let your beauty shine forth. And this I give to you, to set in your tapestry... a golden amber gift... wear it with love. Shannon Mahalko (c) 2006 [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:11:32 01/20/08 Sun Quote: _____________________________ The amber of warm friendships mingled with emerald moments of nature's communion. _____________________________ ~ Shannon girl, I thoroughly enjoyed the associations of gemstones to life and this part I've quoted, loved that especially, hon beautifully written *hugs* Sash xx  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Stormheart [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 02:48:58 01/21/08 Mon Thanks, Sash! Sometimes being an artist helps my muse, and sometimes frustrates it...as there are times I see thoughts in colors and impressions, rather than words, and it's almost impossible to get them on paper....this is an attempt to do just that....glad you enjoyed it...:D [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 08:56:24 01/21/08 Mon Wonderful essence in this. Read it twice and found that it keeps on giving. Colors, gemstones, bring to mind such vivid images and your metaphors are fresh and not too far fetched to sit comfortably in my thoughts. A joy to read! thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Stormheart [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 10:59:22 01/21/08 Mon Thanks, Andy! It's always a joy to be appreciated! :D [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Good Knight [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:27:08 01/21/08 Mon Really a jewl within the poem I loved the theme [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Stormheart [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 00:04:42 01/22/08 Tue Thanks, Bill! I'm always happy to see you around, and have your insight! Thanks, my friend! ((hugs)) [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Janel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:10:18 01/21/08 Mon This is jus lovely Stormheart, i love it much. :) [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Stormheart [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 00:05:25 01/22/08 Tue Thanks, Janel....appreciate the compliments, and the read! :D [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 00:28:48 01/22/08 Tue Hello Shannon The visuals shimmer and shine from the page, enlivened and emoted by the words you paint them with. The sentiments in here warm the heart as the jewels shine the spirit. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Stormheart [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 08:49:02 01/22/08 Tue Thanks, Max! *offers a warm amber gem* :D [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: AnneMarie [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 09:48:00 01/22/08 Tue This is simply amazing, I don't know what else to say~WOW. I love the vividness of the color/gems. Great One, kudos to you!!! Hugs, AnneMarie [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Stormheart [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 09:55:03 01/22/08 Tue Thanks so much for stopping by to read! *hugs back to you* :D [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |