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] Date Posted: 11:08:05 01/15/08 Tue We turn to compulsions To fill an immense void We fill it with fallow soil And watch as seasons Shrivel and swell We stay and we watch And wait for something To grow ~Lily [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Good Knight [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 12:04:50 01/15/08 Tue Completly enjoyed this piece my day has more meaning through your inspiration my friend [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mick [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 12:17:35 01/15/08 Tue Much enjoyed Lily - saw parallels to the war in this one. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 13:23:29 01/15/08 Tue This one can metaphor to many different places. Your poems expand so well. Always enjoyed reading you but, feel like your pen has much more command now. Such a joy to have you here with us Kell. andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 13:57:13 01/15/08 Tue Tis short tho full of many layers.. looks like an onion, under the skin there's another. Must be read several times, for sure. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Stormheart [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 16:37:54 01/15/08 Tue Yes, definitely one for many musings....very enjoyable and worth the re reads! [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Lily [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:21:31 01/15/08 Tue Good Knight, well thank you friend, nice to know my words can make a difference... Mick, in life, love and war, many seasons have passed by, and still fallow soil ..when will a season finally be fruitful? Andy, the pen has command of me, believe me.. thank you muchhhhhhhh dear heart Mireille, i like it that others can apply it to other scapes... Stormheart, i'm glad you think it worthy of multiple musings.. thanks all so much for your comments, they light up my day.. ~Lily [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 00:33:25 01/16/08 Wed Hello Lily Now here's a very poigniant message, and one seed that has definately blossomed in that fallow soil. Have to go to work in a mo, and i will plough that hollow furrow again today, but in there somewhere, there's be a spark....and some money to pay the bills. Loved where this took my mind. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Lily [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 03:12:23 01/17/08 Thu hi Max yes, one thing remains a constant, the never ending tilling.. thanks for dropping by Max.. ~Lily [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Bagger Vance [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 05:04:45 01/17/08 Thu make time your friend, well, at least that's wot i thought after i gave up tryin to kill it..hahahaha.. ahem...coughs i be likin ur snap shot of a moment kel gurl aye kudos i say mhmm [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 05:46:47 01/17/08 Thu Lily, oh Lily!, In all my time online I have read many styles and thoughts, enjoyed and even loved some enough to file for my pleasure. You have the ability to make me scream with appreciation with these short punchy writes, No one, save our own dear Julee Swanson, has such a distinct effect on me in the genre, Happiness is seeing you write again mate, love and hugs, Paul. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Lily [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 00:19:41 01/19/08 Sat yessa Bagger, we must be kind to friend time, it be a slow ride horse.. thanks for your eyes amidst my friend.. :) thankU pauly, feels good to be writing again, although in little spits and spurts, the words, they're drizzling in.. :) you're a treasure, mate!! ~Lily [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 01:06:02 01/19/08 Sat As sweet as honey, this one. Wonderful read. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Lily [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 02:03:28 01/19/08 Sat most kind of you Arunansu, i recently learned that honey never spoils.. ~Lily [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Bobby [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 05:18:06 01/19/08 Sat Hiya Lily I thought the ending bit especially is perfect. Loved this Kel! Enjoyed! Hugs! Bobby [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Lily [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 09:54:28 01/19/08 Sat ah perfect endings - how rare such things are.. i find in poetry that the end is often the beginning, if that makes sense :) .. thanks for your visitation bobby.. be well [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |