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] Date Posted: 04:11:01 01/17/08 Thu desperation was a glint slapped on purple roving, roaming with paper bend of the slow purr it is the middle of 'where' for 'no' makes stories and spirals tingle the back bones into a frenzy we have eyes to mark the quiet along the stoic walls for gravity hung there well and endowed to boast of dark things the flicker of a hush that bit into the dressed air and the quivering light begged for the second coming of melt sing you have candle eyes that smooth plush easily for medicine man nasty and deliverance was as good as done under tones and over mountains it would've been the best kept the best weep unforgettable simply BV (c) Copyright 2008 All Rights Reserved [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 08:05:37 01/17/08 Thu Dear Bagger Your words are above my understanding the reading is a great pleasure always DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 11:43:49 01/17/08 Thu Sounds like something never started or stopped when it wasn't supposed to, Great scribe, BV. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:25:44 01/17/08 Thu ~ ahhh but there is much beauty is closing doors, dear Bagz... all we can do is keep walking forward, in light... and I hope, personally, that the medicine man keeps pouring his poetry no matter what shade, tone, or hue......love whatcha do, hon Arohanui *Northside hugs* Sash xx  [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 15:38:03 01/17/08 Thu Bagger, The depth of your soul is revealed always in the rich river of your poetry. Love the way you phrase things and the uniqueness of your metaphors as well. thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Good Knight [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 16:45:21 01/17/08 Thu Admirable your pleasing way GK aka WC [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Lily [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 02:21:52 01/19/08 Sat I'm sitting up straight :) the first line is a little bright gem! your melt sing inspires and lingers, as often your poetry does.. sweet exhale Bagger... ~Lily [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Bagger Vance [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 07:33:13 01/19/08 Sat DSL it's always a delight to see that you stopped by my friend.. to help your insight on my writing (Bill aka Poemwriter was in the same boat as you are now)here's a little background... my poetry doesn't necessarily follow conventional constructs nor do i necessarily spell things out.. so in saying that, when i write, it is more to convey the 'essence' of something.. the 'feeling' of something by using word pictures, symbolism, abstractions and surrealism to either condense a moment or to 'paint' something.. so my suggestion would be, next time you're reading, abandon your search for logic but rather sit back with a glass of wine and indulge in the fusion of imageries... hope this helps my friend MIREILLE smiles.. mhmm.. maybe SASHER GURL grins... i know aye? am pleased to see you here dear poetess fren, may this find you well ANDY thanks for sayin so my old friend.. tis an honor to have your company and i hope this finds you in good stead GOOD KNIGHT dayummm i not knowin wot to say.. you are too generous fren Knight but fanks all da same he tells you for your appreciashun.. .blessings to you my friend LILY awww pless your heart dear poetess fren why fank you for your kind sentiments and for visiting him... much blessings in turn to you and your mercurial pen [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 15:23:01 01/19/08 Sat Bagger, I was most pleased to read your explanation of the essence of BV. I read it carefully and found it most useful, but why didn't you just say: " Just get completely pissed and it will all make sense?" Hahahahahahahahahaa, As always my friend you bring new dimensions to our minds, Peace and love, paul. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Janel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:13:49 01/19/08 Sat This is awesome Bagger, I like your writing style and love the words you've penned. Read this twice. Janel [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Bagger Vance [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 04:57:51 01/20/08 Sun SIR PAUL i oughta slap ur ass your lordship hahahahahahahahaha... ahem... well dang i suppose i should've huh? dam good to see you dropped by my friend and fankz oodlez foa da kind words JANEL ah poetess, sweet rain tis be for your words and your presence.. much appreciashun he tells you and he sends blessings to your house [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 05:26:09 01/20/08 Sun Dear BV, I would say I have understood some parts of it ... that of the eyes being compared to a candle, weeping... but not sure what you meant by "medicine man nasty". However, the read is unique, and innovative to the highest degree. Take a bow. Cheers. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Stormheart [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 10:44:06 01/20/08 Sun Baggers....always a pleasure to read, and sink into the imagery of your soul....waves of rich sing wash upon the shore of my mind, and soothe then frenzied tingles with a smooth purr... Love every word of it. :D [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 04:07:05 01/21/08 Mon Bagger! Shhhhhh! You know that sort of thing is only for saturday nights!!!Hahahahahaha My dear friend, I always enjoy and respect your work, and this piece was no exception.Unique is the pen of the mighty Kiwi Bard! Peace and love, Paul. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |