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] Date Posted: 07:25:48 01/20/08 Sun Passion's Penance Her storm surge floods my shoreline where my ocean meets its wall where my tides rise and fall she rewrites the map of my days in the crystalline castles of our dreams I walk into the bald and naked future yesterday collapses like a falling tree today feels like the past as if I have sat here typing far too long when my heart is starving and my soul thirsts I look for her in the sea winds outside my door I am hungry for her flower, my seed brings forth her purple in our tsunami storms our passion reigns the clouds burst their tears feed her garden in the aftermath of our lovers dance we both run in opposite directions FOR it is the power of our passion that brings our tidal waves ashore ajs [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Stormheart [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 10:46:54 01/20/08 Sun Passionate and powerful! Love the metaphors and imagery in this! Bring on the storm! Wow! [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 08:46:53 01/21/08 Mon Smiling, yes, bring on the storm. If not we might all go to sleep in the sun. Much appreciated! thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Shalah [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 12:58:29 01/20/08 Sun Sigh... WOW.... this left me breathless, Mr. Spaschak. Beautiful. Nothing else needs to be said. Beautiful. Love you. ~Shalah [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 08:47:59 01/21/08 Mon Shalah, Love you too! Thanks for leaving me your sweet words. hugs, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mireille [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:49:43 01/20/08 Sun Ah, Andy, this Passion's Penance is a monument of unleashed love !! I love it much ! [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 08:49:01 01/21/08 Mon Mir, I love that! "A monument of unleashed love". Geeze, you are even poetic in your replies. Big Smiles for you, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 15:12:26 01/20/08 Sun ~ Ohh Wow, I LOVE this!!!!! Andz, I love how this one can be read as an ode to our Earth Mother, or a delicious pouring of passion for a lover. So beautifully charged with emotion and passion, and is a real treat for me to read. It's my first read of the day, and wow, what a stunning way to kick off my day *big smile* *love 'n' kiwi hugs* Sash xx   . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 08:51:05 01/21/08 Mon Sasha, ..........and I love that you picked up on that. Even if not by intention, a poem brings two possibilities to the arena, then it becomes somewhat larger than the space it keeps. Talk to you very soon partner! smiles, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 23:49:57 01/20/08 Sun Andy, very passionate write indeed. Great work. I have become a fan of yours. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 08:52:08 01/21/08 Mon Arunansu, Your time, comments, and poetry are a welcomed presence here. Thank you, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 03:22:38 01/21/08 Mon Andy, I am feeling a change in your writes of late. This one is a powerful penning, passionate and flowing. It held me and that is all that matters my friend, Incredible work, Peace and love, Paul [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 08:54:06 01/21/08 Mon Paul, It happens, the change thing, you know, we cycle in all we do. Although, a few of the poems I have posted lately were written at different periods of time. Anyway, I am happy that you enjoyed the read and I hope you have a kick ass kind of week. thanks mate, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |