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Subject: Wake Up Call


Author:
andy
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Date Posted: 15:24:21 01/14/08 Mon


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Wake Up Call

She was the crescent moon
hanging in my suspended mind
quarter turns from day to night
squeezing the light out of fading stars

Midnight is still the man in me
there comes a time for barking
traveling down the b-lines of dreams
into a hot bowel of creamy soup
after the release comes warmth

I have learned something along the way
All bones are a shade less than white
some yellow, some gray, some
returned to Mother Earth, soiled
in the great disappointment that comes
later, when a man disregards his heart

I shan't hate the Dandelions
they paint the day just as marigolds
there's enough green in summer's day
flower my world with vibrant hues
wake me again, remind me
I'm still alive



ajs




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[> Subject: Re: Wake Up Call


Author:
Mireille
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Date Posted: 17:54:12 01/14/08 Mon

Wake up Rockstar !! lol !!

Indeed, you're alive and your lines kicked sun into my sleepless night. Thank you.

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[> [> Subject: Re: Wake Up Call


Author:
andy
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Date Posted: 12:59:26 01/15/08 Tue



Mir,

There you are!

Will be over to your place before the day is out.

Miss Ya and thanks,
me

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[> Subject: Re: Wake Up Call


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 19:52:13 01/14/08 Mon


Quote:
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She was the crescent moon
hanging in my suspended mind
quarter turns from day to night
squeezing the light out of fading stars
___________________________

~ a really beautiful opening strophe, that sets the voice

to speak in dreamy mellow tones throughout this entire poem
this brings beautiful things to my day, thank you, dear one

*warm hugs*

Sash xx


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[> [> Subject: Re: Wake Up Call


Author:
andy
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Date Posted: 13:00:41 01/15/08 Tue



Was that me, speaking in "dreamy, mellow, tones?"

Wow, I must be getting soft!

Thanks partner.

You bring smiles to my world.

hugs,
andy

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[> Subject: Re: Wake Up Call


Author:
Janel
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Date Posted: 21:15:04 01/14/08 Mon

*Gently wakes you up,
takes your hand and gives
a big tight hug.*

You're more than alive dear heart,
you're a blessing and you bring warmth
and light to my day always.

Love this so very much Andy.

Love you,
Janel

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[> [> Subject: Re: Wake Up Call


Author:
andy
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Date Posted: 13:01:54 01/15/08 Tue



Sweet one, you are a raibow in a cloudy sky.

Thank you for your kindness and for all that you do.

big jug hugs,
andy

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[> Subject: Re: Wake Up Call


Author:
Darkerside of light
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Date Posted: 02:31:01 01/15/08 Tue

A poem that takes you everywhere in thought but there's pain here well done the pen

DSL

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[> [> Subject: Re: Wake Up Call


Author:
andy
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Date Posted: 13:19:38 01/15/08 Tue

Mark,

Thanks a bunch always appreciate you stopping by.

best,
andy

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[> Subject: Re: Wake Up Call


Author:
Arunansu
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Date Posted: 03:34:55 01/15/08 Tue

THIS ONE ROCKS!!!

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[> Subject: Re: Wake Up Call


Author:
Lily
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Date Posted: 11:06:17 01/15/08 Tue

some days, life is ezactly like squeezing the light out of fading stars.. i love reading you Andy.. your words remind me i'm alive.. oh and i love dandelions... roar :)

~Lily

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