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] Date Posted: 04:27:32 01/05/08 Sat  Unlaced & Undone It echoes through the attic, dusty, dark, a melody that soars to yearning height. In shadow, though the moon smiled brightly stark, her single window, opened to the light. So, came the Saturday of April rain, a burlap wish that fell to weathered floor. This melancholy verse of lilting pain, brought yester days that bled her weeping core. Poured satin of regret, loosed at the seams, where love had failed to consummate the dance. Now left to wear another’s broken dreams, unlaced from her desire, without glance. Through April’s window, water, soon would run, to reach, to drown, to render dreams undone. © Sasha ‘07 . [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Bobby [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 05:22:02 01/05/08 Sat Powerful writing Sasha!! Really cool picture too, interesting. I can see you inspiration for this sonnet. Well done, enjoyed this read! hugs! Bobby [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:35:54 01/07/08 Mon ~ thanks so much, Bobby, yeah it's an excellent picture... Kel sent it to me at a time when I was feeling really blocked so it's really helped me love when you stop by, hon *warm hugs* Sash xx  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Good Knight [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 06:40:16 01/05/08 Sat Awesome and beautiful Sasha you turn a word into magic a phrase into art and a collection of both into divine poetry [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:43:58 01/07/08 Mon ~ Hiya GK *waving* so lovely to have you here with us, dear one and I thank you, for such a lovely comment, ya made me smile *hugs* Sash xx . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 06:42:58 01/05/08 Sat This is SUPERB. Thats all I can say at the moment.Brilliant as ever. I think we all would savor more such rains. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:52:02 01/07/08 Mon ~ thank you, Arun I'm so happy you enjoyed this piece, my friend you've helped make this a great day *hugs* Sash xx . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 13:48:02 01/05/08 Sat Sasha, yes, i am partial to your pen. that said, I am just amazed at how well you write these sonnets. you can't teach someone to write like that. you can teach them iambic pentemeter and how to write a closing couplet but you could never teach them to write words on a page that lift off and sail the stars before they land with the grace of ages. You really need to publish a book of sonnets. I am going to get that in motion before this year is done. You moved me here (can you tell?) LOL Wonderful! That's all just freakin' Wonderful poetry! Now, give up more before I kick you kiwi azzzzzzzzzzzzzzz! luv ya muches, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 20:06:34 01/07/08 Mon ~ ((((((((((((you totally rock, the world))))))))))) you've just made my day!!!! thank you so much for this beautiful award, love your photography and thank you for all that you are, and all that you do, Andz you really do rock this world I read you, and I learn.... *love 'n' kiwi hugs* Sash xx . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy (Awarded) [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:05:08 01/05/08 Sat Sash, I have read this about six times tonight. I keep getting on and off the computer and the poem keeps calling me back to it. I looked at it very closely and my conclusion is; it's just about as close to perfect as any poem I have read in quite some time. Congrats! I'll be placing it in the Hall of Fame as well!  [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 20:15:02 01/07/08 Mon Quote: ____________________________________________ Sash, I have read this about six times tonight. I keep getting on and off the computer and the poem keeps calling me back to it. I looked at it very closely and my conclusion is; it's just about as close to perfect as any poem I have read in quite some time. Congrats! ____________________________________________ ~ what a beautiful thing to say, Andz I'm-over-the-moon happy that this one moved you, hon thank you for YOU!!! *warm hugs* Sash xxx . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sue [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:29:52 01/05/08 Sat I dangle my feet and thirst .. gosh, it can never be written the way you write, dear sash ... *sigh* ... would you please correct that and set it right? i miss seeing it ... but this piece ... wow! this screams "sasha" ... and it is absolutely beautiful ... am watching it unfold in the reels of my mind ... excellent, my dear sweet friend, just excellent ... [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:31:14 01/07/08 Mon "and I dangle thirsty feet, begging to touch the cool stream...of thought" is this the one you mean, Sue? (((((((((Sue)))))))) thank you, sweetie....I'm thrilled to bits that you enjoyed this piece, I'm pleased with how it turned out, it's such a cool picture, and I just dove into it and came out with this I love when you stop by, dear one *warm hugs* Sash xx . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Janel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:22:45 01/07/08 Mon Am so feeling this Sasha, you've expressed it so very beautifully, and it is flawless. Tis so very deserving of the award my friend, congrats! Huggs, Janel [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:44:07 01/08/08 Tue ~ awww Janel, thank you, sweetie I'm just stoked that you enjoyed it always, a smile you gift, dear one *hugs* Sash xx  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Jessica [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 05:16:03 01/08/08 Tue Sasha, I don't know why I didn't respond before; I read this poem every time I see it. You have such a lovely way with creating a sense of magic that I admire so. This is particularly lovely. Love it, Dear! Jess [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:46:57 01/08/08 Tue ~ (((((Jess))))) what a beautiful thing to say that you read this one every time you see it, smiles me from the inside, out, dear one your warm appreciation is a blessing to my day, Jess *warm hugs* Sash xx . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Lily [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 05:26:20 01/08/08 Tue sighs, yes the melancholy voice in this, has me sighing.. i'm with andy, this is a fantastique write Sasha.. brava bella! and congrats on the award.. ~Lily [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:52:54 01/08/08 Tue ~ ((((((((love ya, Kel)))))))) thank you, sweetie, and the award was such a cool surprise :) and if it wasn't for this VERY cool picture you sent me, this poem would not have existed, sooo a great BIG thank you, to YOU!!!!!!! I'm thrilled ta bits that you love this one *cool kiwi hugs* Sash xx . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: AnneMarie [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 13:38:08 01/10/08 Thu WOW Sash, I'm speechless. This is divine! You've said it all leaving me to only feel. You are remarkable~Cheers! Big hugs, AnneMarie [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: . [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:45:18 01/13/08 Sun  Read of the Day 13th January, 2008 Chosen by Janel MUSE MONGERS READ OF THE DAY!!!  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |