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Subject: At your fingertips

Author:
Arunansu

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Date Posted: 21:49:19 12/22/07 Sat

Wish I were a CD
ringed on your forefinger;

you could play out my tracks
at your whim.

You could figure out
the looming sessions,

our impending meetings
in future Springs.

Inadvertently, like cryptic Viruses,
my doggerels could enter
your secured system, and multiply

�Drat! The miserable thing has hanged the gadget!�

Life would get stuck
with your tinkering.

Would you then install
our windows anew?

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[> Subject: Re: At your fingertips
Author: Bagger Vance [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 16:13:00 12/23/07 Sun ohhhhh I like thisssssssssss!!! so witty da way you ply such themes and imagery why i feel like um, putting on a CD myself just to err experience the grooves, the laser finger onda discs coughs heh heh much enjoyed much noddings much filling you excell friend poet well well done mhmmmmm (o: [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: At your fingertips
Author: Janel [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 20:50:47 12/23/07 Sun Very creative Arunansu, love the thought process of this.. excellent. [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: At your fingertips
Author: Arunansu [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 21:37:34 12/23/07 Sun Thank you all. [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: At your fingertips
Author: Sasha [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 20:13:54 01/13/08 Sun oh I'm glad I went for a wander back through the pages... I had missed this one the first time around a very clever and satisfying piece of poetry, my friend much enjoyed hugs Sash xx [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: At your fingertips
Author: Arunansu [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 20:49:18 01/13/08 Sun Thanks, Sasha. Cheers. [ Post a Reply to This Message ]