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] Date Posted: 03:31:06 01/11/08 Fri In the laps of gods The gods have brought us this far So connected up I’m a real live wire Every time I think it’s slowing up The gods hit the throttle Taking us higher Beyond my imagination Well above my station There no safe landing Just inspiration No parachute Kinda of scary Kinda cute When they scrape us off the tarmac They will see from the smiles on our faces That we are never coming back The god’s hands that push Eyes that guide Don’t worry about us Are we ever in control? I hear demons cackling as they set out on their nightly foot patrol For we are just here for the ride Reality check Computer access denied So we have no choice to carry on Who is going to tidy up When our separate universes collide No pointing fingers No where to hide Shall we find a unicorn? Then out of town quickly ride Because, may be and perhaps The gods know it’s in their laps DSL [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 04:43:48 01/11/08 Fri Yeah God knows what will happen next. Well written, DSL. Cheers. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 07:10:53 01/12/08 Sat Hi Arunansu Some times I just wonder some things happen in my life and there are paths that I walk that could cost and would be easier not to walk them at all. Cheers DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:54:37 01/11/08 Fri Your ability to promote profoundness in your poetry is admirable. Enjoy reading you very much! thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 07:12:31 01/12/08 Sat Hi Andy Good to hear from you and the kind comments DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 22:25:27 01/11/08 Fri ~ this one made me me smile I know all too well, how one minute we can be cruising along when suddenly life speeds up, then slow down again, it can spin us around, and shove us up against walls...only 'change' is a constant... I thoroughly enjoyed this piece, Mark...well done *hugs* Sash xx  [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 07:17:11 01/12/08 Sat Hi Sash We all like to think we are in control of our own lifes and in so many ways we are how ever there are forces out there that effect us not always in negetive but possitive ways too, And if I had a few hours I tried to explain more CHEERS DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Stormheart [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 16:15:35 01/12/08 Sat Thanks for the ride! Very thought provoking, and great use of imagery...sounds like you were writing about my life, exactly! LOL! Great work! [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 04:15:28 01/13/08 Sun Hi Stormheart pleased to meet you The poem is inspired by my own life and how things happen in this and I can't account for why these things happenning. Cheers DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 16:43:27 01/12/08 Sat Mark, I loved this, though maybe not from the same perspective as most, being an athiest I believe only in fate and no intervention.Life is just a bucket of worms! LOL Peace and love, Paul. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 04:23:24 01/13/08 Sun Hi Paul In Japan they have gods for everything and anything I like to think it is realy the same one god people just choose different ways of praying and worshiping. Regarding fate I'm there too as I think god doesn't want us to be lazy he does like us to get on with it but like any parent looks on see's what we doing then under his breath mutters Oh shit! DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |