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Subject: Sleepy Folllow


Author:
Lily
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Date Posted: 14:26:40 12/10/07 Mon

It's a long orbit for those
with portals in their pockets

we trace etched names
and forget the knife

carve today and place
tomorrow in a locket

sand to glass
and death to life



~Lily

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[> Subject: Re: Sleepy Folllow


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 20:55:15 12/10/07 Mon


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It's a long orbit for those
with portals in their pockets

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~ it surely is, dear Lily...

your poetry is mesmerizing, my dear friend
always intriguing...this one speaks to me

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sand to glass
and death to life
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and so the cycle goes...
yet beautifully described, here
I just love what you do, hon

*hugs*

Sash xx


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[> Subject: Re: Sleepy Folllow


Author:
Janel
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Date Posted: 21:39:25 12/10/07 Mon

This is awesome Lily,
so much wisdom within your words,
it truly speaks volumes. Love it much.

Janel

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[> Subject: Re: Sleepy Folllow


Author:
Paul
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Date Posted: 04:33:37 12/11/07 Tue

Lily,

No one puts it quite like you! This leaves me wanting a long chat over a BIG coffee! LOL.Terrific,

Love and hugs,

Paul.

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[> Subject: Re: Sleepy Folllow


Author:
Lily
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Date Posted: 23:58:05 12/11/07 Tue

Sasha, that you read my little tidbits, means muchaaa.. thanks so much, for allowing my words to be part of your world..

Hi Janel :) ..straight off the zen winds this one was .. thank youuuuuuu

ah when the storm subsides here, i look forward to chatting with you pauly, just don't ask me what this poem is about, because i have no idea.. lol oz hugs foa uuuu

~Lily

ps. christmas is kind of annoying lol

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[> Subject: Re: Sleepy Folllow


Author:
andy
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Date Posted: 06:21:17 12/12/07 Wed




Ah, lots in this little poem here.

Time goes by and you forget how much
you enjoyed someone's poetry.

It so wonderful to have you here sharing
you gifts with all of us.

smiles,
andy

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[> Subject: Re: Sleepy Folllow


Author:
Max Hardy
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Date Posted: 11:12:49 12/12/07 Wed

Hello Lily

Loved the musings, and the visual questions this painted in my mind. Just checking to see where the portals in my pocket go....

Max

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[> Subject: Re: Sleepy Folllow


Author:
Lily
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Date Posted: 00:22:44 12/13/07 Thu

thanks andy.. truly a pleasure to be here.. you have no idea :) ..or maybe you do

mile of smiles,
~Lily

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[> Subject: Re: Sleepy Folllow


Author:
Lily
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Date Posted: 00:27:43 12/13/07 Thu

take caution in them worlds of pocket portals.. some of them drink up a lot of time ya know :)

thankU for your eyes here Max, appreciated much...

~Lily

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[> Subject: Re: Sleepy Folllow


Author:
Mireille
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Date Posted: 11:48:50 12/13/07 Thu

Short but most effective and thoughtful, love that.

Thanks for this share, Lily.

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[> Subject: Re: Sleepy Folllow


Author:
Lily
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Date Posted: 22:52:28 12/13/07 Thu

Hi Mireille, and you're welcome...
thankU so much!!


~Lily

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[> Subject: Re: Sleepy Folllow


Author:
andy
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Date Posted: 19:22:25 01/06/08 Sun


Your poem has been placed upon the Muse Mongers Mantle

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Sasha
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Date Posted: 21:24:12 01/06/08 Sun

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~ Congratulations on the Mantel, dear Kel

it's so good to see this piece here, hon

a cool treat to my stinkin' hot arvo

*kiwi hugs*

Sash xx


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[> Subject: Re: Sleepy Folllow


Author:
Lily
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Date Posted: 22:34:59 01/06/08 Sun

a smile you gift andy :) -- thank you for the honour..

hehe thankU Sasha, hope it cools down for you soon.. ozhugginz :)

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[> Subject: Re: Sleepy Folllow


Author:
Arunansu
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Date Posted: 00:32:08 01/07/08 Mon

Truly a very interesting piece. I lovee your write, Lily.
Cheers.

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[> Subject: Re: Sleepy Folllow


Author:
Darkerside of light
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Date Posted: 05:45:15 01/07/08 Mon

More to meet the eye and heart than these words convey

DSL

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[> Subject: Re: Sleepy Folllow


Author:
Bobby
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Date Posted: 18:02:34 01/07/08 Mon

Hiya Kelle

Damn, this is tight and certainly rocks
in every way, the sounds, the content, form
about as close to masterpiecing as possible.
Awesome read!! I will be back for more. Thanks!!
Great to read you again my friend!

Hugs!
Bobby

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[> Subject: Re: Sleepy Folllow


Author:
Lily
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Date Posted: 05:20:02 01/08/08 Tue

Aranunsu, DSL, Bobby.. i am smiling big, ok? yes i am :)

~Lily

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[> Subject: Re: Sleepy Folllow


Author:
Anne-Marie
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Date Posted: 02:37:59 01/12/08 Sat



Congrats Lily, you certainly deserve the honor. Amazing the powerful punch your words make. Hugs~

XOXOXO,
AnneMarie

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[> Subject: Re: Sleepy Folllow


Author:
Uullee
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Date Posted: 16:21:08 01/12/08 Sat

oh to read this! and what it brought to me...
way to write!

huggers
Julee

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[> Subject: Re: Sleepy Folllow


Author:
Lily
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Date Posted: 01:48:25 01/13/08 Sun

hi Anne-Marie, thanks for touching this.. saw your little spiel in, um, that room where everyone introduces themselves lol.. was good to see the face to the name :)

:) <-- what seeing you here brought to me -- love it when you visit my friend, big bear hugginz for youuu Uullee..

~Lily

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