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] Date Posted: 08:55:05 01/14/08 Mon Hanging into the future Waiting for the snow to fall Looking forward to the next day Tearing the paper from the wall Throw the telly out the window Makes a nice big hole For everything else to follow I mustn’t throw out the dog I need to take him for a walk tomorrow I can’t wait I can’t wait I can see the rabbit on the moon Holding the hammer Pull up with a guitar The rabbit is playing our tune I can’t wait Not in this state I can’t wait Let’s put our bodies together Create the date Create The date Simplicities Confused with possibilities Start from a heaving heart End with the faintest hope Touch me now I’m dying for anecdote If I’m not careful My own actions will be some one’s quote So the words will have to just stay stuck hidden Passing the head never clearing the throat DSL [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 10:57:04 01/14/08 Mon Inner turmoil and the struggle of it expressed so well. We all fight with ourselves and should be able to relate to your words. Well done! thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 01:21:27 01/15/08 Tue Hi Andy I often have said poetry is my therapy so may be like you've said before it's hard to put me in a box. What's scary is when others make more sence out of my words than I ever can. Cheers DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Black Star [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:52:05 01/14/08 Mon I'm not sure why but I loved these lines "I mustn’t throw out the dog I need to take him for a walk tomorrow" Excellent stuff, fighting with yourself, one of the wrose kinds of fighting I find. Love Black Star [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 01:25:02 01/15/08 Tue Hi Black Star I think it's been a long time since we last met I like that line too Thanking you DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Janel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 20:22:24 01/14/08 Mon I do this a lot.... i've been struggling a lot lately, and there's always so much going on in my mind that it feels jus like this. I understand this deeply. Well done Dsl. Huggs, Janel [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 01:27:50 01/15/08 Tue Hi Janel Pleased to see that you relate to this and you like a few others picked up on my feeling in what is an off the wall free flowing pen CHEERS DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Ash [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 01:59:29 01/15/08 Tue Superbly done DSL You have managed to capture the emotion of confusion so well - when the soul is in turmoil the mind races with so many thoughts. It is so good to read you, using your poetry as an outlet for your emotions. May you find the peace you look for. Ash [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Arunansu [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 02:15:23 01/15/08 Tue Wonderfully written. I particularely like S1. Cheers. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |